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5'10 being unusually tall for a 12 year old is an understatement... even with the abilities of Wolverine. That's just an insane height for that age.
Thanks for the chapter.
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I like how he is and how you are going about giving him more substance then other main characters I've read on this platform. Just remember, Devas is Human. I recommend not killing his overall humanity like those is most cultivation novels do or really most Chinese novels I've read before I stopped reading lean towards doing. All the greatest characters of any book are the characters you can relate to. No matter the good or bad they've done. Keep him sentimental but Devas as a character will one day dive into the darker part of humanity like the fear he saw in his minds cape or dreamscape. That too will shape him as a character depending on how he will go about either running from or facing his fear.