Mithren
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Mithren9dComentado porDoes this mean days here are only 12 hours long?
Indeed, that's cultivating for one full day—twelve hours!detailClan Cultivation: Starting from Beast TamingOriental · Purple Violet Emperor Of The Middle Heaven- Mithren9dComentado por
Mana is typically magic based. Spiritual energy is more typical of cultivation novels
After getting the basic situation straight, using the memories and the muscle memory of his body, Zhou Chun quickly entered a meditative state to begin recovering his Mana.detailClan Cultivation: Starting from Beast TamingOriental · Purple Violet Emperor Of The Middle Heaven - Mithren26drespondió a Grayback
With an attitude like that nobody will want to give you constructive criticism let alone meaningful feedback. If you feel like the feedback doesn't fit you can choose to not respond or to act like an adult rather than like an immature child.
A high-level comprehensive Tantra AKA cultivation technique, would have its own sets of Yantra, Mantra, Mudra, Asana, and Prana. These sets would vary after each layer or chapter mentioned in the Tantra. - Mithren28dComentado por
He didn't know anything but now 'recalls' news reports?
Immediately, seeing this scene, Kyle recalled the news reports on tv that he had seen so far. He knew it was too late for her. He stepped back and covered his mouth with his hand as tears blurred his vision. - Mithren29dPublicado por
Very nitpicky review here. Lots of little mistakes that a good editor would catch. Too many cliche bits. I didn't get very far before deciding to drop. Continued reading may well show story worth reading but this start... I admit this review is harsh and nitpicky but as I'm dropping the story over these points I belive it worth sharing my view.
- Mithren29dComentado por
Yuck. Another narcissistic MC
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Mithren29dComentado por
No more mouth. He dubbed it away
A boy about 11 or 12 years old opened his eyes, patting the table in front of him, shaking his head groggily, and sat up on the chair. He rubbed away his mouth with a confused expression that shrouded his face. - Mithren29dComentado por
I mean seniority wise he's below
"Teacher Gale, Boss Zhang, then there's you, Ajax. Well, there's Big Sis Sera, but she's in a coma, so it doesn't count. As for the bunnies… Teacher, is he above or below the bunnies?" - Mithren29dComentado por
With how much he accomplished in just a few hours... he should scared
"Few hours? Anyway, we got LOTS of stuff to do!" - Mithren30dComentado por
But he has none of those...
[You must give this to someone in the next 24 hours, and they must take it willingly. Otherwise, your dog, relatives, and your first love may all die! You've been warned!] - Mithren30dComentado por
He just fished up a soul. Could he not just pay with it?
Souls again?! Did everything here require souls? One could say that the name sure checked out. Oh well, it seemed like it was the end for today. - Mithren30dComentado por
Poison testing?
Zinnia opened her mouth and took a mouthful. She chewed thoughtfully, finding the taste to be extra refreshing for some reason. 'He is as charming as the day I first met him,' she thought to herself and smiled as she looked at Aksai's face, which was closer to hers. - Mithren30dComentado por
Why not go to the farm and then pass through the farms barrier? You know like he did the first time?
One had to be reminded that the Myriad Worlds Painting allowed Aksai to designate only one location per world as a fixed spawn zone—he'd return to where he left off. So, any return to Sharang would place him back inside Serenity Peak. - Mithren30dComentado por
lol. The everwoof farm
As such, he opted to postpone the research and experiments for a while. He could take things slowly inside the safety of the Everwoof farm anyway. Spirit farming had taught Aksai many things, and patience was one of the key lessons imparted to him very early on. - Mithren1mthrespondió a Poet_Of_Deep_Chaos
Oof. So vicious of you. Now I must have a horrible day just to vex you. (I don't admit to being childish or bored)
"At least two hundred pounds for a start," - Mithren1mthrespondió a Poet_Of_Deep_Chaos
Nope. Can't do that. I'd rather just annoy you cause you're telling me what to do and I find that rude.
"At least two hundred pounds for a start," - Mithren1mthrespondió a YesMan
That I dare say is an animated hotdog disguised as a cartoon.
Although it was down to two legs, its fleeing speed was still astonishingly fast.detailImmortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat pointsOriental · Smoke Painted - Mithren1mthrespondió a Barakonda
I disagree. Body cultivation is the nearest analog that's used to 'explain' his cultivation and cover up for the system. There are plenty of instances where he's clearly lacking in strength. To then suddenly have strength sufficient to easily destroy artifacts is jarring and contradictory.
With a chuckle, he grasped Lin Mang's sword blade, halting the Sword Qi abruptly, and with a slight squeeze of his fingers, crushed the blade to dust, leaving Lin Mang's eyes nearly popping out in shock.