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Mooncloud

Mooncloud

Lv5

My works are currently on hiatus, writing a worthy novel for the meantime.

2017-07-07 Se unióPhilippines
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud2yr
    respondió a 0rochi

    Yeah, she is. yep.

    Ch 5 Chapter 4 - Childhood (3)
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud2yr
    respondió a BASTILLE

    Really? I might need to rewrite that or just make it so he's going to develop real good soon to support that statement. I was trying to write it safe cause if I did it 5'6 or higher then he'll mess up the movie itself. Well, thank you for pointing that out!

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud2yr
    respondió a SageOfSins

    I'll be able to update more frequently soon, just trying to slip this chaps in my time for now. Scheds a bit tedious since I'm a Nursing student. Though thank you very much for your support!

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud2yr
    respondió a Acsmaster007

    The thing is, I'm trying to write a person. Someone who has feelings. Humans are social animals, and most needs the presence of others in their lives. A person can also be selfish but still have genuine friendship with others. If a real person who has spent most of his life with someone dies and reincarnates. He'll most likely be thinking of doing whatever it takes just to meet that someone. I assure you, though that I'm not going to linger for too long in matters regarding Mark. Also, regarding helping others. it isn't something dumb or cliche, nor does it mean Dean is a pushover. You either help others for the sake of it, or you do it as an investment; in terms of financial and emotional favor.

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud2yr
    respondió a SageOfSins

    Thank you!

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Inplay

    yes, I've missed a few but important details in the previous version as well as the way the story progress. I've reviewed and hated how limited the affect of certain events such as the attack on Brennadam. There will be a lot of changes, though I believe it is for the better.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a enoc_sierra

    Let's see, it would be possible for Jaina. Sylvanas too was my favorite character and I would have made her the lover of our mc if she wasn't taken.

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Alvinbrrrrrr

    Yep he might still be young, but that world doesn't have the same moral values we have in this world. In fact, you won't find it weird if you were exposed to sexual relationships at a young age. Also, I didn't explicitly said it but he's reincarnated. Just wanted to slowly drop information instead of bombing em in one go. But yeah, you can read his thoughts comparing the world to earth in earlier chapters, I'd be damned if I wrote a reincarnated person without sexual experience, and even wouldn't chase skirts if given the chance to.

    Her tear-stained eyes glued at the once gentle face, that soft, gentle hands that held her body tightly were now driving her away, indifferent to her plea. She was thoroughly confused, but more than that, devastated. She wailed. "You've already sullied me!"
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Chin1234

    Must be sad to be plotted by your future father-in-law. Who knows, Ozai might have liked him enough to spare some time for his daughter's birthday just to see Haji. Though, that's impossible, the guy's cold-blooded.

    Ch 8 Chapter 8 - Azula's Birthday
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a 125678901234567909

    Not really, I have different plans for the mc. He might be part of major events though, but the outcome wouldn't change that much.

    Ch 8 Chapter 8 - Azula's Birthday
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Alvinbrrrrrr

    He's 13, I haven't written it yet, and Yue's two years older than him. I was going to write his age during his enlistment.

    Her tear-stained eyes glued at the once gentle face, that soft, gentle hands that held her body tightly were now driving her away, indifferent to her plea. She was thoroughly confused, but more than that, devastated. She wailed. "You've already sullied me!"
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a KingofThingz

    We'll see, cause the only way for him to meet her is if he joins the raiders early on.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 - Meeting
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
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    He winked "at" the Arabian girl* Please delete this comment after you've read it.

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
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    I've found your story very refreshing, it has picturesque scenes, the way you were able to write it off is fascinating. In terms of the personality of characters, they all are very unique, unlike the usual wooden-block ones.

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Na1gel

    It took me weeks to start writing again, I'm also learning how to write better and I wanted to give the effort this series deserves. Hopefully, I will be able to arouse your imaginations through my writing.

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Darkzero21

    Yes, I didn't want to explicitly state it but yes.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Date (3)
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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Darkzero21

    Yep, didn't put much detail into it so I can write a whole volume of backstory later.

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Lakaet

    7 years before the dark portal

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a Na1gel

    Sarah's nine, and the other kids, I might rewrite the chapter prior here to state her age. Daniel's six years old but his physique is larger due to his bloodline, thereby, making him look older than someone his age. My god, i've tried imitating how the children in Rise of the lich king talks. I thought Sarah would mature faster after a year in the manor due to the being taught by Elaine. Regarding Daniel, it's quite normal for him to talk like that due to his actual age in his past life and his noble bloodline.

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  • Mooncloud
    Mooncloud3yr
    respondió a TheMystic

    Guess he's already considered a cuck at the mere mention of Sylvanas being a love interest.

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