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Better off playing the game but this is a great fanfic :)

It wouldn't be as bad if the author has just said it's a fanfic..

I don't personally mind fanfic but isn't this portrayed as original work but is actually fanfic? lol

Why are there these authors using other creators work as part of their story. I mean, the author could have easily created his own world but borrows more from mount and blade.. Similar cases in some other stories created by CN authors, it's closer to fanfic than original story.

ROTSSG has lots of plot holes also one thing that I remember clearly is pace is really slow in terms of chapters but if you compare real life time vs chapters it's crazy that only few weeks has passed and the chapters are like few hundreds lol Although, I did enjoy the novel. I may try this novel and hopefully it's good as I usually read reviews first.

Chapter release was slow for me but it is what you expect from a quality work :) I highly recommend people to read this novel, it is one if not the best web novels out there. Also, as some said it's already completed. So, now is the best time to read it, just google it and you will see where you can read it for free, the author posted it in different site originally.

Sadly skimming chapters at this point. I will stick with ATG for *** scenes XD Anyway, good while it lasted.

Lack of, lots of lack of research on the authors part. It would have been better if the direction of the novel was in terms of magic: this happens then this happens logic can be thrown out the window as long as the rules itself has created is consistent. What we have in this novel is building of technology products or items without the prerequisites being fulfilled. This is nothing to do with being a scientist but just a lack of attention to details on the authors part. No one wants a step by step instructions or guide to be read in these novels but that doesn't mean you simply ignore simple logic such as you'd need certain tools or techs to be advanced enough to make the said tools. You can't just simply bypass that just because of the system or knowledge you have. If that's what the author is going for then it's better to just ask the system to get them the said items instead of it being about creating technological advanced items.

The logic regarding power being fueled by bloodliners seems fine but cause and effect seems to be not so solid The original ability dying out cause of lack of source is understandable but suppose a fire ability burns a tree, the fire that is fueled by a user disappearing is fine but what about the fire being fueled by burning of wood itself. I am thinking in terms of the ability being a catalyst in this case at least. Anyway good story, keep up the great work!

Original review: The MC especially to listen to was really cringy. I personally didn't like the way the comedy was shown, it felt forced to me. I am gonna update the review if it gets better / changes for the better. Updated review: I got back into this novel after forgetting about it. Great thing about it is I could remember more and more as i kept reading. As for my original review I can't remember where exactly that happened but I continued from chapter 90 or so and it's not bad at all, updated the review from 3 to 3.6