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Complete trash! The biggest problem is the garbage quality MTL. I'll never understand why people can't just take some time to edit the MTL and make it readable. Story wise, the MC gets railroaded by his system, which makes it feel like he has no actual agency.
Despite being in the fanfiction section, this is a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic and you can definitely tell. The story isn't particularly well written and filled with a lot of the clichés typically found in Chinese novels (especially xianxia), despite being set in Dragon Ball. The translation is also terrible, especially when it comes to the characters names. It feels like the translator just ran the raws through MTL and couldn't even be bothered to properly edit the result...
The MC joined the Straw Hats and promptly started fighting many of the battles Luffy fought in canon. It feels incredibly weird that a member of the crew keeps fighting stronger opponents than the captain. I'm also confused about the MC's Devil Fruit, the Paper Paper fruit, which for some reason the Author made into a Paramecia, even though there is already a Logia Paper Paper Fruit from an old One Piece game...
He's really reckless for always answering first. It's incredibly suspicious that he always knows the answer.
100th place is Guy? Whoever wrote this garbage was clearly high...
The story itself may be decent, but I can't tell, because the translation is absolute garbage. Definitely MTL tier. I also don't understand why so many authors feel the need to make the world of Pokémon edgy.
I don't get why so many authors have to put their own spin on the cultivation in xianxia novels. Just stick with Qi, instead of making things confusing, by using Quarks or whatever.
It's actually impressive how the author managed to write a MC this unlikable...
Really misleading summary. I expected a fic with Severus Snape as the MC, instead I got a female MC.
Thanks for the warning. It's always frustrating when authors keep filling their novels with racism, thinly disguised as nationalism.Fantasy authors should keep their writing separate from real world politics.