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Ferro8dComentado porNice delivery. Hype.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.- Ferro8dComentado por
Nee is for female no? or am I wrong?
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Ferro8drespondió a KK9494Ch 30 Chapter 30 : Celadon city [5th Gym] with Unbelievable end
- Ferro8drespondió a KK9494
I think it has to be with the fanbase of each anime. I read both but I like pokemon a little bit more. I didn't know you had another fanfic. Will read it. Amazing work on this one BTW. Will this have kingdom-building elements of him fixin-owning-upgrading his hometown?
Ch 30 Chapter 30 : Celadon city [5th Gym] with Unbelievable end - Ferro12dComentado por"Hadō Number 88 – Flying Dragon Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon!"
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"All right reserved to the author 笔下藏剑 (for the fanfic) and Masashi Kishimoto (for Naruto)" No, just masaki kishimoto has rights. This author doesn't even own his own fanfic. Using a world that is not yours, nor even the MC which is Aizen. Get that in your heads, monetizing fanfic or giving rights to this outhors over fanfics is kinda stupid. Just read for free and don't support any patreon.
- Ferro12dComentado por
Is this a gay fic? Is not in the tags.
Standing no taller than six feet, and perhaps an inch or two shorter, the man possesses black hair bound back from his long face. It's a pretty face, if not for the slight stubble along his strong jaw Levi might have thought it too pretty a face for a man. His dark violet eyes hold a charm to them and seem to glitter in amusement as if the man is the only one privy to a particularly amusing secret. Despite being dressed in an all back uniform of command and wearing an equally dark cloak, Levy knows that this man is intimately familiar with using the longsword at his hip to reap human lives. - Ferro14dComentado por
I don't agree with monetizing a world that is not yours. But nice going for you dude.
[A/N: Thank you for the support everyone. I never anticipated such a response on pat teon!] - Ferro17dPublicado por
- Ferro20dComentado porThe divine essence coalesced, forming a brilliant luminescence that danced and swirled, gradually assuming a tangible shape. From the ethereal mist emerged the unmistakable figure of Vlad Tepes, a perfect human vessel meticulously crafted by Eru's divine touch.
- Ferro23drespondió a MadScythe
- Ferro1mthComentado por
Maybe you should worry about quality over quantity. There are master pieces with 15k a chapter released either weekly or monthly or something like that.
AN: I don't understand why it's hard for me now to write three chapters; maybe it's because I've increased the words per chapter. Previously, I was writing chapters of 1,200 to 1,300 words, but now they are 1,400 to 1,700 words. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I still can't do it. - Ferro1mthrespondió a SLappY
Yeah that is kinda weird.
As Pete started walking back toward Arcanine, Courtney quickly tried to explain, "It isn't what it looks like! Ugh, okay, it is! But I didn't plan for this to happen! And I didn't make out with Jasmine! It was one brush of our lips while drunk and lightheaded!" - Ferro1mthComentado porMoves: Gravity, Healing Wave, Healing Bell
- Ferro1mthComentado porCh 71 Meeting of the Gods Part 1
- Ferro2mthComentado por
you are repeating yourself.
But even as she missed him, Ino couldn't help but feel a sense of pride in her heart. Koushin had entrusted her with his secret technique, and she was determined to make him proud. She knew that he had faith in her abilities, and that thought alone gave her the strength to continue her training, no matter how difficult it may be. - Ferro2mthrespondió a TheFanficGod
Pedo author? wow....
Ino's eyes would occasionally linger on mine, and her smile seemed to grow brighter whenever our gazes met. We danced around each other, neither one of us quite willing to admit our feelings openly. It was a game we both enjoyed playing, each of us carefully testing the waters, seeing how far we could push before retreating back into the safety of our casual friendship. - Ferro2mthComentado por
Nice decision. If a little abrupt but really good development. good job imo
AN: The author noticed that the system made a lot of mistakes, so he decided to eliminate this cancer for the betterment of the plot. - Ferro3mthComentado por
Dialog is kinda dumb. Is this AI? My dude, the attack already happened what do you mean? It's already war.
"Is the Raikage intent on starting a full-blown war between our villages?" Hiruzen's words echoed through the clearing, each syllable carrying the weight of responsibility and concern. The forest seemed to hush in anticipation, awaiting Dodai's response.