RubyKing

Definitely!!

thanks!!! let me know if you find plot holes or inconsistencies, I really will appreciate it

I'm Totally in love with this book. I added it to my library!!! I hope you continue writing it. Keep up the good work and keep updating [img=recommend]

I found it interesting! but the paragraphs are way too long hahaaha it ends up tiring Try to break them, no need to rewrite them. just split those long paragraphs into 3 or 4 small ones

OK, I know where this is going! And I feel like I'm going to cry hahahahahaha let's see if it really happens Anyway, I liked the beginning! direct to the point

The story is interesting; I liked it! My only criticism is that even though the chapters are tiny, the paragraphs are large, tiring the reading a little. It would be good to break them up a little, making them easier to read.

I really love regression stories. even though this isn't our "usual" regression story, it still got me excited. I can't wait for the next chapters

GooooD

Like any good author without shame, I'm going to review my own book kkkkk I had started writing this book on another account a LONG time ago, just the beginning, but I deleted it! Wuel.. This book is my private world; I always think about it when I go to sleep or when I'm bored. This book started when I had to design a Visual ID as a TCC. (TCC is a course conclusion project that the graduates need to finish at the end of college, I don't know what it's called in other countries, hahaha) For this project, I created a fictional game and had to make the game's background. That's when the embryo of this world began to be born, and I started to think about this world a little bit every day, even after finishing the project. I'm not saying all this for you to think it's good, hahaha; it's just to let you know that it was my private world for a long time. Before, I tried to share it, but I deleted it because I wasn't comfortable. Now I want to try sharing it again. It might go bad, but I hope you enjoy the journey.