Vistarion

Author can write novel where reaction to mc talent = content. Its terrible bcs it assumes reader IQ is low.

This novel idea is grand but it feels like "adult project" but made by a lewd child. The MC feels fake(like a child) for his actual age(he was old) before "travel beck in time". On top of that even first chapters are 0 because of author lack of maturity. MC died fighting 4 werwolves and his nephew x2 are captured and ofc MC focuses on the woman who came to save him at that time and blush...

I hope that Author write this story its a great idea. Giving 5* just because I want to see what this concept can became. Author plz write its 100% very good idea.

I dont think so, but to ask a person that q... if you were would you know?

Thx for free content. I did not read yet, just reading coments to see if its worth it. I love negative coments. One can gather moust important info on books. Thay make it easy to judge if you want to read it. Thats why i dont like authors who avoide critic reagardless if its free or not.

1 good coment and insted of thanking the guy for effort author try to push "im right becous im author" narative. If u love "i love this novel" coments i can writhe one for you! ITS SO GREAT! Wow its super! Author you are so gooood! This novel is the best ! If you preffer to get empty coments just add it in your review! "Guys dont make real coments i dont want to be better i just want to be loved"

xd its not a book for u if thats your q ;]

Hmm i get the feeling i know what kind of person you are. So try this one over 900+ chp: https://comrademao.com/novel/hogwarts-bloodline-wizard/ MC at the end 1v1 Vold/Grinvald As for more IQ+: Harry Potter and the Temporal Beacon Short(70chp) but very well writen concept of time magic HP+Herimione(if i remember corectly)

24chp

This is not HP fanfick. There is very minimal amount of HP lore and style here. Author butchered anything that resemblet HP style. MC is OP and its cringe ... you can feel forcefullnes of mc in everything he do. Forced plot and relly pointless. Nathing is explained well its all as if author writed from his head without any planing.