The_Pen

This arc ruined it for me. Seems like the author just randomly killed him and ruined the system too. Never liked quest systems and works traveling. Just turned into an average power fantasy now.

The main character is so dumb. Also it seems like you killed off the parents just to remove any attachments he might have.He can read and write, and should be good at basic stuff like maths, so him becoming a farmer makes no sense.Also the 7 years of no quests is more that you hadn't planned for that long, so you made a literal quest reward not even be a reward, since it's just his supervisor in a box...Seems like you are just writing with no direction or planning.

Nuke is way too strong. A hydrogen bomb like the Tsar Bomba can literally wipe out many cities. you can literally nuke the city next to him, and it would be too late for him to do anything. he would just be vaporized into nothing before he realized that the nuke had gone off.

Rip, the time travel basically ruined it.

An interesting story, it's strange that it hasn't had that many views. Although it isn't the highest quality, I appreciate the effort it takes to write. And in this case, the story is slightly different to what we normally get from webnovel.

This chapter felt like a fever dream.

Seems like an interesting story. Can't wait to read the rest.

There is literally a tool called Prometheus for monitoring application containers...

This is just AI generated gibberish now. Terrible to read. Like eating a soup with too many ingredient.

Not a fan of the merging memories. Seems like it was only done to give him objectives to complete.