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What! I'm reincarnated as kyogre!

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when Ron wake up, he found out that he die and reincarnated as kyogre,killing monster on the sea and shock the world sending tsunami hundred meter with just moving fins and flood the world with just breathing, exposed by live streaming on the sea becoming the alpha Pokemon on the sea, exposing another legendary Pokemon and mythical to the entire world scientist:"what kinda creature are you?how can you send tsunami by moving your fins,is this even make any sense!" netizens:"what! this whale just control the sea and make Storm!" world:"what! there even more creature like this one? we don't know anything like groudon or rayquaza who live in ozone layer?" Ron:"I'm the god of sea and I just want to get strong to beat groudon and expand the sea"

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Can’t say much about this because it only has 2 chapters but I enjoy the concept of it all. I like the fanfics were the protagonist is actually a Pokémon and not just a generic trainer. What I can say is that there are so many just writing issues it is atrocious. Like I wouldn’t even call some of it misspelling… it’s just wrong in multiple ways that honestly I could somewhat translate it into something that was somewhat understandable… but I bet must people wouldn’t even bother that much to translate something from what should be English into actual English. The story is fine I guess and the idea is great but like… words that should be plural aren’t, sentences have words missing or have words in the wrong places, grammar issues, some sentences don’t make any sense, and just the past, present, and future tenses get mixed up. 3 stars rating is a generous honestly and it was mainly because of the idea otherwise it would had been like a 1 because this is like middle school level of writing.

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