The Voidwalker's Tale: Fallen Paradise

Heya ! Here's my shameless author review :') Just wanted to wish everyone a wonderful day, whenever you may see this, and I hope my story has been enjoyable thus far. It's my first time ever writing a serious project like this; but I've been loving it. Reimi and Astrid will need all the support they can get- I also wanted to quickly apologize for my upload schedule. I one hundred percent plan on finishing this story, but, I wanna take my time with it; and prioritize quality over quantity. I hope you all understand; the chapters will be worth the wait though, I promise. Love you all !

I really love the Story and the character development, it give me that awsome vibe that gets me hooked up

My readthrough of this story, was very enjoyable I haven't had to much experience in the Yuri genre but it's safe to say that the relationship written into this story is complex and very adorable. The dynamic and dichotomy between the two characters is very well depicted making the two female leads have a yin and Yang feel to them in how they balance each other out. Writing quality is very nice. Had a clear an easy time visualising the environment, characters and threats. High amounts of detail are given towards painting the overall picture of the story. Allowing the story to feel very life-like when delivering these descriptions for the reader. I really enjoyed the character design, the two female leads are so much fun to read through. Their conversational dynamics and the way their personalities bounce off each others quirks is so adorable. This is just the beginning of their budding relationship so I can't wait to see how they develop into a couple. The characters are also given clear mindsets for the reader to understand where the character is mentally and why they do said actions of behaviours. Updating stability is consistent, considering how meaty each chapter is. Lots of content per chapter allowing me to be perfectly fine with it coming out weekly just for the sheer amount written. World background is delivered very slowly to the reader, this allows for alot of mystery to sprout in the reader's mind over what the world setting is and how it became this way. There is already a level of depth in the world for the pieces that are revealed to the reader such as the angels and their culture. Don't want to spoil too much. Overall I was captivated throughout the whole story, making the time fly by in the process of reading through this. The characters feel real and so do their emotions. Im really excited to see how the relationships develop as well the world and which seeds will get developed first. Keep going strong Yeon your story is wonderful :D.

Fantasy, action, horror, this book has it all! It's really interesting to have a mostly mute MC. Both Reimi and Astrid are likable and the author has a good sense of when to provide the context to some of the world building and when not to. There are only four chapters so I can't assume anything regarding development but it certainly has potential!

The concept and storyline is quite captive of the story...love the way you buildup your character designed they are quote fascinating. The writing style made a reader to easy to imagine the senses you described....keep it up dear author

Although I generally don't read Yuri's, this one was written well enough for me to finish all the published chapters. The descriptions are well done, and the characterizations well thought out. Congrats

It's kinda cool how you write. Thanks for filling our eyes with such good stuff. 🤗🤗🤗

From the beginning we get a good idea of what’s to come in terms of character and the descriptive quality of the story. The images described are shocking in the gruesome detail and it feels like I’m able to imagine everything in HD. The first chapter is the best so far, because it feels the most focused. The focus on the hook is great because it makes the reader want to be invested, and I love the first few paragraphs. The meeting of Astrid and Reimi is intriguing and makes me wonder why suddenly people are interested in Reimi when it seems they avoided Reimi before. I like the contrast between Astrid and Reimi, like night and day. Astrid is a bright sunny star and Reimi is a dark mysterious moon. I also think it’s interesting that Reimi doesn’t even speak until chapter four! Some things that can be improved include having a better balance between action scenes and descriptive paragraphs. I think chapter two is so action-packed, it seems there’s an imbalance between descriptions of setting and the action. A suggestion when going back to edit is to balance the action scenes by adding some more descriptive elements otherwise it feels like BAM BAM BAM one big action or fight after the other. Another point is in terms of plot, I don’t see a clear desire or direction. There is definitely a lot of conflict and elements in the story that could add to the direction! But I wonder for the character development, how will that work itself out? I like how there’s something like an alliance forming between Astrid and Reimi and the way Astrid protects Reimi is so sweet. I don’t think we need a full idea of the plot since that should unravel as the story goes on but it would be nice if during the story there’s some kind of desire of the character for Reimi especially I would love to see a stronger motivation (love/revenge/identity) though I think there is already a great base for a possible focus on Reimi’s identity. Overall it’s super enjoyable so far and I look forward to reading more!

This story is bursting with potential, but unfortunately, there are only four chapters available at the moment. The dark emotions and themes have got me completely hooked, and I'm eagerly anticipating the next update. However, the release schedule seems a bit slow for my liking.

The way that author writes the book is very advanced, allowing us to see and smell the description of the book. Very nicely done book, nicely done.

The writing style is excellent, and the author's ability to describe the senses in a way that makes it easy for the reader to imagine is impressive. I found myself completely immersed in the story, feeling as though I was right there alongside the characters. The beginning of the novel is amazing, and it sets the tone for the rest of the story. The author did an excellent job of hooking the reader in and keeping them interested throughout every chapter. Keep up the great work!

I should say I am still in the early chapters. But I already likw this. Keep going author

amazing. best thing i’ve read in a LONG time. write faster! 10/10

The beginning is quite amazing 😍. I loved it to be honest. Good job

Love this story! The writing is beautiful, the description and the battle fight are amazing! The setting of the story is unique for me, since it is in the modern world. I hope you update daily too, it would be good for the reader. It's ok to have less words in every chapter, as long as you update daily, the reader will come!

Really loving the story. The first chapter already is sucking you into the MC's life story. And the writing was readable, and actually quite good to be honest. Love the way the author describe things 😊

The first chapter by itself exceeded my expectations. Something I notice with a lot of webnovels is grammar and spelling issues but you have little to none. Something that really stuck with me was the main character Reimei. Maybe it’s their condition, but something in me wants to support her all the way. Conclusion: need more [img=update]

oh, I like it. Story is written in descriptive way. The plot gives me sense of newness. Waiting for future chapters and will be changing review again.

The writing here describes everything so well. The story so far looks very interesting. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep updating more.

Wow I really do like the creepy aura of this book, it really makes me wanna read more, The synopsis is just perfect and keeps the reader clued to their screen.. Novels like this, really have the chance of becoming so addictive and amazing, please do keep on updating author 😊 😊