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The Villain's Rhapsody: God's Wrath你好!

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Lee la novela The Villain's Rhapsody: God's Wrath你好! escrita por el autor Red_Venerable publicada en WebNovel. The last rewrite of my trial novel The Villain's Rhapsody. Enjoy. Something wakes up within the unknown realm. Awakened by the girl named Elizabeth who accidentally entered his world, he set his eyes ...

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The last rewrite of my trial novel The Villain's Rhapsody. Enjoy. Something wakes up within the unknown realm. Awakened by the girl named Elizabeth who accidentally entered his world, he set his eyes on human world. Is the world prepared? https://discord.gg/venerables

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DarkElven6
DarkElven6Lv13DarkElven6

Writing Quality needs some work. Inkstone is not the most forgiving of tools so learning how it works is an absolute must! I would suggest the author spend time learning more about present/past tense and active/passive voice. First chapter is what drops the writing quality the most. If you can look past it then the following chapters are much easier to read. This author is still developing their narrative voice, so it is interesting to read in the later chapters as they settle into it. As of right now there are only 18 chapters. Keep up the good work and focus on developing your writing speed and more stable updates. Story requires you to settle in and pay attention. It makes you ask questions about the plot and gets you emotionally attached to the MC. As the writing style settles the development will become more clear. I would like to see more emotional involvement with your character as she is dealing with some pretty serious issues. Doing research on depression will bring this character more alive. However, this character is above average for WN so I applaud your work here. The background of the world is interesting and I would like you to give more detailed picture of the different worlds and the layers of people in them. Can't wait to see you develop as an author. Good luck and have fun!

Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Lv14Night_Crawler619

Now I'm only giving it 5 stars coz of the Author's bold choice in representing their world. Mixed tense is used for the writing, which means both past and present tenses are used to describe the story. There are a few grammatical errors but I think we can work with that. I suggest editing the first 3 chapters and uploading them again as the first chaps are the most important chapters of any book in wn. Showing us the world is where the author shines. The world is unique and the characters are brilliantly written. By brilliant I mean they don't feel 1 dimensional, they feel kinda alive. Ofc I may be partial since I like this kind of story lol. Story development is both, fast and slow-paced at times but I found it to my liking. All in all, I think it's a good story if we look past the first few chapters' writing as the writing gets good later on.

Red_Venerable
Red_VenerableAutorRed_Venerable

This review is totally not a shameful self-review in the slightest. Anyway, this is my last rework for my novel, and there won't be any more revamps. I am finally ready for the run. My primary language is not English, and my grammar is not perfect, but I am trying my best to improve, so please be patient with me. The main story will begin after chapter 20, and I am incredibly sorry for taking it so long. I hope you will enjoy reading it just as much as I enjoy writing it. This review is not a shameful self-review(x2).

Ramirys
RamirysLv13Ramirys

This novel has a good and unique concept. Other than the small grammatical errors, I don't find any issues with the book. The author does a good job with helping you to envision the characters and the world right from the first chapter.

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