The Spirit Of Evolution

In this worlds concepts are not just that some concepts or ideas are so strong that they are given physical form such as death you can not see it work you can not see it harvesting the soul. An imaginary being with no form but in this world it’s different such concepts do exist as living beings born at the beginning of the world starting out as nothing more than spirits we follow one such concept and idea Evolution. We shall follow its story as a mindless creature seeking along with the other concepts of the universe to improve themselves through whatever means possible. My first novel feedback is appreciated.