The son of the God-Emperor in Warhammer Fantasy

I have already said it, the novel is interesting but there are two things that I cannot tolerate, that the names of the characters are constantly being changed, and that the protagonist is so submissive to someone with a higher rank when he is the son of the Emperor, it seems to me pathetic, in my opinion the novel would be better if the MC was more dominant.

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it's a good story but needs someone to revise grammar because it's a translation. The overall is good but sometimes it's hard to read and understand.

Ask chat gpt to revise the chapter with better grammar .

Good Stuff made me launch a brettonian campaigne on total war.

This is a solid novel, well cut above the rest. Grammar is great with a good flow. The story is reminiscent of more traditional fantasy novel, where there is one grand quest (currently) and along the journey adversaries, companions, and new revelations come and go. You actually do have to read thoroughly rather than skim or you'll get lost pretty quickly. It's been a great read 50 chapters in. Give it a try.

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