Fantastic! This novel is really well written, it has a somewhat complicated vocabulary but we can still understand everything. The author uses a lot of "honeyed" words, but it doesn't just feel like a flex, no, it really blends well with the setting of the world. There are a few errors here and there but it isn't something that would make me drop it, it is clearly above the average Webnovel.
The sentences also flow well as if it were some sort of fairy tale. It has dark themes that compliment well with the setting, while some don't like that, I found it really great.
The World is getting more and more developped, to such a point in which we can easily imagine it. The Development is quite slow, but also not too the point where we are shown absolutly everything about the mc's daily life, which is good. The characters are well-designed with their appaerance also refelcting their personallity giving us a somewhat free reign of imagination. Daily updates for now, so yeah, awesome!
Now one of the problem i had with this story was that in the world building chapters it was going here and there without much order, that it bored me a little. I also felt it that it was sometime a bit too monotone, I couldn't feel much exsitment in reading the later chapters. But I haven't read every chapters out yet so I don't know if it gets better.
While your choice of words is really good, sometime the sentences feel a bit weird too read, and could be a bit better, but for the most part they flow well. Try to bring a bit more of tension, or such emotions in your novel and I am sure it'll get popular. And for World building don't dumb that much at the same moment, slowly extend it. Make it so that we are informed about it when it is mentioned not just at the beginning. Too much world building bores people, so put it in between thing.
Overall, a really good novel!
