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The Girl from the East

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What is The Girl from the East

Lee la novela The Girl from the East escrita por el autor Samuel_Davids publicada en WebNovel. The Girl from the East is a novel that mirrors the normal territorial conflicts which occurs in our contemprary world. It's a journey which involves wars, evacuations, deaths and others. Would the 16 ...

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The Girl from the East is a novel that mirrors the normal territorial conflicts which occurs in our contemprary world. It's a journey which involves wars, evacuations, deaths and others. Would the 16 year old girl be able to end this conflict and bring peace and balance to the land?

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Interesting Love your work Recommendable Keep up the good work Author

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The idea is promising but a few touches need to be made. 1. More paragraphs: Few paragraphs make the work a little overbearing to read so please give paragraphs at most after three to four sentences. 2. Spacing: At the end of certain sentences, there are no spaces giving no difference between the end of a sentence and the beginning of another. Overall, the plot is nice but it needs some editing. Keep up the good work by the way. Writing isn't easy

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