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The Eternity

Autor: ayexun
Fantasy Romance
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Lee la novela The Eternity escrita por el autor ayexun publicada en WebNovel. The Last Heavenly Demon Awakening..... A tale of six youths from four different clans of heavenly palace eventually ended up together in a school of cultivation. Together they go through many things, ...

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The Last Heavenly Demon Awakening..... A tale of six youths from four different clans of heavenly palace eventually ended up together in a school of cultivation. Together they go through many things, find their soulmates and weapons. After that, a series of mysteries started to reveal as well as people, which tore them apart and they go through their ambitious punishments of life. After waiting for a long, when they finally meet again, they team up to find a demonic ARC and their lost hearts. The ARC that can lead the world in chaos, led them in chaos instead. But the biggest mystery is yet to be revealed. A thousands of years old mystery, a Heavenly demon awakening!!! Now can these youths will be able to fall in love and save the world from this awakening or they will again fall apart!!.....

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The narration was very straightforward but it didn't failed to deliver its message. It was understandable and it was impressive to the fact that the author is not a native speaker of english. Keep fighting author! I am rooting for your success!

Miss_Asriya
Miss_AsriyaLv1Miss_Asriya

The author did a good job on the characters and the pacing of the story is well made enough for the readers to understand what is happening. However, maybe put more imagery or details into describing. Any more than that, I think this story has great potential. Keep it up author! Great work.

Obliviousstudent
ObliviousstudentLv3Obliviousstudent

Wow... after reading the first few lines I already knew what the author was talking about. I will read this book, I don't normally read books here but I will read this and you should too. It's captivating.

OneClaudia
OneClaudiaLv2OneClaudia

First of all, i love the cover. It drags me into some type of undescribable world and i love it. Secondly, the introduction into the book is quite good, in my case a little unusual but nice. I like the first chapters, interesting story.

Luminous_Arcadian
Luminous_ArcadianLv3Luminous_Arcadian

It's an intriguing story that has a good plotline. The character design was good, and the story development was well-paced. The writing quality was fine and direct. It was written minimally. The story was comprehensible enough to the readers, but I think it could be better by adding more details to the descriptions, especially during conversations. There were a few errors that need fixing, but they'll be smoothened with a few revisions. Overall, it's a good story, and polishing it more would make the best out of it. I wish the author the best of luck!

KayLillyt_1
KayLillyt_1Lv4KayLillyt_1

Very engaging novel. So many twists and turn and characters all fascinating and compelling. The path the story takes is Incredible. Not to mention a fascinating world background. All intriguing, all worth reading.

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

After reading the first few chapters, I realised this a great novel to spend my time with! Although there are many grammatical errors such as (in the synopsis you could write (waiting instead of waited), some lack of commas, and tenses, I am sure with a little editting, this novel is going to be very amazing! You could also try not to write dialogues or descriptions inside a parenthesi, unless necessary. In that way, the flow of conversation will be superb [img=recommend] Kudos for the authro~

kpthe1
kpthe1Lv12kpthe1

First of all the story is very complicated yet the plot made it very easy to understand. It is very interesting. There are some error, so with proper editing this will become an excellent read!!

Just_Scissors
Just_ScissorsLv1Just_Scissors

There are many grammar errors, but that doesn't shine away from the fact that the novel was unique and fresh. I wrote some of my reviews in the comments. ne more thing to add is stick to one type of narrating. I notice you jump from first person to third person, and that can be confusing. So try to stick to one type of narrating only.

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