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What is Reborn In central city

Lee la novela Reborn In central city escrita por el autor allen2flash publicada en WebNovel. our unfortunate mc passes to the central city also known as the home of the flash,watch as he begins a journey in this familiar but unknown world and growing from an unknown to a hero...……………………..Note...

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our unfortunate mc passes to the central city also known as the home of the flash,watch as he begins a journey in this familiar but unknown world and growing from an unknown to a hero...…………………….. Note: I don't own any dc characters and they belong with DC comics, I wrote this is just for fun

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allen2flash
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Very vast universe plan and a hero who believes in justice and likes being optimistic and likes to help those in need.and many more elements which are missed in the shows are all covered here You will get loads of action and romance This is guaranteed

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undyinginmortall11
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Please poste onces in a while a chapter please You rreaders are waiting and the next there gone The dont have the time to stay and wait fore months zo please chapter

XxxAce
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You should definitely update it it is a good story pleeaaaasssssaassa h h h h

Daoistskyshaker
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It sucked it did not explaining anything what's so ever but nice try keep going forward. Although it sucked it can still be improved in ......................................................................

Anish_Kumar_6194
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i liked the story. But please update fast. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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llalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalat drop it continue doing amazing job :) llalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalat drop it continue doing amazing job :) llalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalat drop it continue doing amazing

neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5neobenmike

Too many plot holes like a bubbly swiss cheese, for spoilers, the mc does not know who nabu is even though he knows who the flash is, the hero who is friends with dr fate. fast paced and confusing in some areas.

crywolfseven
crywolfsevenLv4crywolfseven

This is a really great story, that said the author really needs to look into something like grammarly.com or one of the other free spelling and grammar checking sites. There are several chapters that can be a bit painful to read, they aren’t anywhere close to some of the worst cases of poor grammar and spelling but I still want to mention it because while I can understand poor grammar in a non native speaker it’s slightly different when they completely misspell words as even the most basic of spell checks catch that. Again I am loving this story but think the grammar and spelling could be holding it back. I also think that honestly the first chapter should just be entirely deleted it doesn’t really matter in the slightest not even as a prologue as even the second chapter serves as a better prologue but is more confusing given the time jump from the first chapter.

i_am_grounded
i_am_groundedLv4i_am_grounded

MC is a character with good characteristic nature😇.. i like it.. good job👍.. keep a regular update plz..☺️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

0vrLrd71
0vrLrd71Lv50vrLrd71

Love the it but... Is it dopped ? . . . . . . . . . . . I hope it isnt and just on break.............. - - - - -- - - - - - - -- - -- - - - - - - -- - - - - -- - - - - - -- - - - - -- - - -- --- - - - -- -- -- -- - -

Galen_C123
Galen_C123Lv3Galen_C123

Why did this stop this is a good story, I hope he gains shazams powers as well maybe even the spectre, he's a magical character right?, anyway my only complaints are that many of the character portrayal's are rough and that the author doesn't have a full understanding of Dr. Fates abilities.

wahlfire
wahlfireLv15wahlfire

It is super good I hope this get the attention it deserves it. ! 😀🤩🤩😁😁😅 s s s a a s s d d z z qqqqqqqqqqqq f g ha d f v b h 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0

undyinginmortall11
undyinginmortall11Lv14undyinginmortall11

Really like the sotry hooping to see more of it if it passes nekt week of 2 xhapters im ginna spend thats day pw sotne on it Great probs to author And keep up the great work

Adepoly
AdepolyLv4Adepoly

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Absol8
Absol8Lv4Absol8

Pls make more chapters, everyday i have to cry when I see that you don't post a chaps once in a while and it makes me feel quite sad on the day you don't post anything so I beg you pls make more chaps and don't drop this if you read this then I'm thankful for the fact that you made this fanfic and I support you and hope that it will only get better with time and really like your story your trustworthy fan😊👍😉👌

nayeem12
nayeem12Lv3nayeem12

great start but pls update more often and add more to the story///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

bharfi
bharfiLv12bharfi

plsssssssssssssssssssssssssss don't quit the novel................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

ElG0hary
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Bro the novel is good hope that you be faster in release also the chapters is a bit short hope to increase it's length. Bro the novel is good hope that you be faster in release also the chapters is a bit short hope to increase it's length. Bro the novel is good hope that you be faster in release also the chapters is a bit short hope to increase it's length.

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