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i don't own anything but Alex and Kayla my friend owns jack all rights to Pokémon goes to their owner

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Well you would think that ash or someone from the games are the main character but no its two twin brothers one named Alexander white Drifter and the others name is Jack Black Drifter

And this is their story.

Alex:(yawns) brother wake up it's time to start our journey!!

Jack: (yawns) I want to sleep more but the journey is more important than sleep right now plus I can sleep tonight.

Alex:well are eggs are supposed to hatch today

Jack: Yeah they keep moving and they are really warm.

Then they heard cracking

Alex:oh crap

Jack: Do my eyes deceive me? I think our eggs are hatching!!!

Alex's egg hatched into a shiny torchic

And

Jack's egg hatched into a shiny treecko

Alex:wow! We got shinies!!

Jack: I'm at a loss for words…

Alex:yeah same umm i think ima put it in a cherish ball!

Jack: Yeah I agree! I think we received 1 each for last year's Birthday.

Alex:we actually received a lot,but anyway we gotta go to the professor's lab

Jack: Yeah, I think it's right here in town.

Jack: Anyways I think we should get going we don't wanna keep the professor waiting

Alex:yeah your right

Jack: Well let's go.

Then we started rushing to his lab,when we arrived he wasnt fucking there

Jack: (annoyed) Are you fucking kidding me! (asks nearby assistant) Where the hell is professor Birch?

Assistant: he was in a rush to pick someone up because their pokemon was in bad condition

Jack: (softens his anger) I see… (to Alex) what now?

Alex:i don't know

Jack: hmmmm I think

All of a sudden professor burst through the door with some boy with a pikachu and the hooked the pikachu up to a machine

Alex::bruh what the hell they doin

Jack: I don't know but I think that Pikachu has an electric build up

Alex: i just want to start my journey so many problems

Jack: I hear you but we must wait

All the sudden the machine exploded and we got smoke all over our face

Alex: now i have to take a shower

Jack: yeah you do that but I'm gonna help

Alex: i guess we could that pikachu just took off and the boy jumped out the broken window

Jack: true but Treecko can search the trees for where they went.

Alex:yeah lets go

We rushed out into the forest

Jack: Where could they be?

Alex:throw out your treecko

Jack: Right, Treecko come out and help!

Treecko came out of his pokeball and looked at jack

Jack: There is a boy with black hair, a blue jacket and red hat chasing a Pikachu which is his partner, climb the trees and help us find them, please.

Treecko jumped into the trees and after a few minutes comes back pointing towards a certain area

Jack: Well done Treecko, now return.

Alex: we should hurry

Jack: Right

When we arrived we seen a group of people in a blimp one with blue hair the other with red and a talking meowth?

Alex:bruh did that cat just talk and whose these cosplayers

Jack: Doesn't matter they're all going down!

All a sudden two girls came out of nowhere with professor birch one of them chose a torch and told it to use amber

Alex: i dont think your saying that right

Jack: Show 'em who's boss Alex.

Alex: torchic come out and show them who's boss use ember!!

Jack: Treecko you too and Use Bullet Seed!

The pikachu was released after they absorbed all the eclectic of pikachu and our attacks damaged their machine alot and the boy had his pikachu use thunderbolt and they were sent flying

Alex:good riddance

Jack: Too easy.

The boy walked over with his pikachu in arms

Ash:thanks for the help my names ash

Jack: No problem, I'm Jack and this is my partner Treecko.

Alex:and im his brother alex and this is torchic

Professor birch walks over and asks what brings us here

Jack: We were looking for you but then we got wrapped up in the whole Team rocket bs.

Professor:oh sorry about that

Alex:it's cool but can we head back I wanna start my journey

Jack: Yeah… Same here

Just then the two beautiful sisters came over

May:hi I'm may and this is my sister kayla

Jack: Hi, I'm Jack. Nice to meet you.

Alex:I'm Alex nice to meet you did you come here to start your journey too

May: Yeah we did. I chose torchic as my partner.

Kayla: I chose mudkip

Alex:nice but we should really head back

Jack: Yeah we need our pokeballs and Pokedex.

Professor: right let's head back

When we arrived he gave all of use 5 pokeballs and a Pokedex

Jack: Thanks professor.

Professor:your welcome and enjoy your journey

When we left we seen may and Kayla cussing out ash for frying their bike so we walked over

Alex:I wouldn't mind buying you a new one

Jack: Yeah we have lots of cash plus ash has been through enough with his Pikachu being sick and all.

May: Your right, Sorry ash, Would it be alright if Kayla and I traveled with you two.

Alex:yeah sure but we should get going before it gets too late

Jack: yeah I want to get to Oldale town before night fall

Kayla:he's right sis we should get going

We all rushed too oldale town when we arrived it started to rain

Alex:that was a close one

Jack: Yeah it was

Alex well let's heal our pokemon and check into a room at the pokecenter

May: I agree let's get 2 rooms one for you and Jack the other for Kayla and I.

Alex:sounds good

Jack: I'm fine with that

Then we headed towards our room after healing our pokemon and closed the door and locked it

Alex: OOF that was a rough day

Jack: Yeah I agree but it was kinda fun except the team rocket people trying to catch Ash's Pikachu.

Alex: true but I kinda liked the redhead

Jack: Yeah she was cool, but not my type.

Alex:the nurse was pretty sexy too and so was the officer we seen to get into town

Jack: I noticed a teal haired police officer. She was pretty and hot.

Alex: well we should get some rest

Jack: Right, Goodnight

End of chapter 1

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