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ORDER(dropped)

Autor: TeHdOrK101
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Hello! This is the first fanfiction that I have ever written so please point out any mistakes and I'll see to correct them. The story takes place in the world of MHA. I recently caught up with the anime and some of the manga. I was fascinated with Stars and Stripes quirk, New Order. I tried looking for stories containing it but couldn't find any good ones besides xlucqs(MHA: New Order) on Fanfiction.Net and Webnovel. His fanfiction was the final straw that motivated me to write my own story revolving around New Order. I hope you enjoy and please leave as much criticism as needed for me to look into and improve upon.

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Blast_Niro
Blast_NiroLv4Blast_Niro

If you think MHA: new order is a good fanfic then I have serious doubts that your work is gonna be any good.

SalmonFish
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At ch7, and I really enjoy the effort the author has made with the writing; Glad to see something like this on webnovel, since I really enjoy the direction of the story. Though, there needs to be a tad more detailing in fight scenes and dialogue scenes, such as thought processes of characters, perspective in combat or interactions, or simply more physical detailing would help with the visualization. Also recommend the use of brackets for locations and more detailed information on how characters look, respond or react to certain situations. Though, for now, this is wonderful, keep it up!

GalahadAlter
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it's good, I like it ...................

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