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NEON UPRISING

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Lee la novela NEON UPRISING escrita por el autor Karlyn_Wehlma publicada en WebNovel. Neon Adnell, a genius born with an eidetic memory, builds a core meant to evolutionize humanity. In the wrong hands, his creation is a weapon, in the right hands, it is a solution to most of humanity’...

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Neon Adnell, a genius born with an eidetic memory, builds a core meant to evolutionize humanity. In the wrong hands, his creation is a weapon, in the right hands, it is a solution to most of humanity’s problems. Teaming up with his old captain squad, they bring new technology to light in order to save people, not once, not twice. But their technology is seen as a threat to government powers. In order to get rid of this technology…this core, Neon unlocks radiative mutated powers and another new universe, different from what he’d envisioned as a cosmos enthusiast, but worth the exploration. He must face new threats everyday, both familiar and unfamiliar, within his world and between worlds. Between it all, he must navigate the tides of love. **************** EXCERPT He kept on running without looking back. Stopping once in a while to catch his breath. He couldn't let the men chasing him catch up on him. He knew that he was in this predicament because of one silly mistake. And now because of his carelessness, not just him but everyone is now in danger, the whole world probably. 'I must protect this box with my life and never let it fall into the wrong hands.' He silently took that resolution All he needed to do was find a way to send a signal. If his apprentice knew that he was in this situation, he knew that the boy would get him out of here in the blink of an eye, all he had to do was to stay alive until help came. Well with all the survival scenarios playing in his head, he did not realize how deep he had gone into the forest Looking from left to right, forward backwards, Only then did he realize that he was lost. Obviously running into an estranged Forest, what could one expect except getting lost. He pulled out a tiny GPS device just the size of a button, stared at it for a couple of minutes before putting it back in his pocket. Now he knew just exactly where to run to. *********** Hello everyone, I'm hoping to get all your support and critics to improve and deliver you with well-polished content. This is a work of fiction, any similarities to real-life or places is strictly to give the story meaning. don't be surprised to see impossible science theories. HAPPY READING!!!

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The writing quality is nice with only a little grammar problem that seems like it can be improved more but it doesn't affect how easy it is to follow and understand the story. The first part of your synopsis reminds me of that movie of Leonardo DiCaprio and Tom Hanks "Catch me if you can". How MC gives that same feeling as how capable he truly is. Although, your first chapter is kinda low on impact or intensity. I check all of your available chapters and I think chapter three "The Core" would do good as an introduction chapter to attract the attention of readers. Good luck and keep working on your book.

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I like the simple writing style that is kind of unique .I have high hopes for the MC and I think he is pretty cool and relatable. From the first chapters you dont really know where he is or whats the deal ...but as the story progresses and if you read the symbiosis first ..which i didnt do ....you get to understand where is this going . Interesting story I would say . The only 'complain ' is that I wish it had more descriptions of the background of the MC from the beginning and world building. Overall the book is catchy . Keep up !

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