Necromancer Mage

Over all I am big fan of evil MC’s, what If this MC were to also be a necromancer? Well say no more and sign me up lol. When it comes to the story, I see a lot of potential here, the mc is pragmatic, cold and smart which is something I like very much. The flow itself is nice and the ease with which you can read and follow along is phenomenal. If there was something I have to point out to be improved upon, it would be the structure of the phrases that sometimes can be out of place, though they do not distort the meaning nor is there much in terms of grammar mistakes. Over all it’s a nice read that I can recommend and I have no doubt that the author will get even better with more experience as they writ this story. May the evil protagonists reign supreme wherever they may go.

one of the best novels I've read if not the best nothing really to complain about but I'm recommending that you don't make it a harem and if you want to include romance make it like 1 or 2 girls since I know people who read novels with evil MC's don't like harem that much sometimes even saying you'll think about it makes them drop it

Good fiction work. Have the potential of becoming a good novel. Will definitely catch the readers attention and make them stand at the edge for more! Keep it up!

Despite there only being a few chapters, this is quite an entertaining read, definitely a big fan of dark fiction like this. Keep up the good work!

pretty good novel! an evil mc is a must have. there are a lot of novels but feature an evil mc. so keep writing it, this type of mc is a nice change of pace for a reader.

oooh i love the vibe of this novel! it kinda has mystery vibes on it. I love it so much. This really has so much potential. Good job! 👍👍👍👍

A single chapter can hit so many likes shows the potential of your story and your wary of writing. Best Wishes

The concept is interesting, but the characters lack more expressiveness. When some characters speak, do not describe their emotions or expressions. Very good until time (1-10 chapters) GOOGLE TRANSLATOR XD

Great writing style! Few chapters but entertaining to read! Although I got confused at the start but as time went on I began to understand and flow with it. This is filled with potential! Keep it up Author!

At first I didn't think it was gonna be a reincarnation type novel and it was gonna be a mystery but I like how it turned out and how the god was pretty cocky that was interesting I like how the god is using him for entertainment. Good job great work loved the novel

The story is really interesting, not gonna lie I thought it would be some kind of mystery type of story at first then it was a reincarnation type kind of one, maybe it's just I didn't read the genre lol. I've read through chapter 3. So far Johnny's reincarnation is the best part for me, also that Abraham Lincoln part was funny haha. Overall, this story is amazing, not gonna lie i think this would be a great plot for an anime.

Hi. Since this is just the beginning of the story, I can't really rate it too much. But if I may give a little advice, I think the writing style is a bit confusing. The grammar still needs to be checked, and some sentences, especially the long ones, need to be cut into shorter sentences so that they can be better understood by the readers. The tempo and scene switching is also a bit too fast. Some parts need narration and description here and there so that the atmosphere can be felt better. However, the theme of this detective murder story is quite interesting and has potential. Keep on with it and make it better.

Whoaa there are barely any chapter but it sucked me in right away! the story is fast pacing and the idea is very interesting. the action scene was very detailed and vivid, as you could easily imagine it happen in front of you. it's kinda confusing since the POV keep changing back and forth, but overall i like it very much! can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good job author!

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gostaria de saber de uma coisa esse historia o mc ficou claassificado como um evilmc e evilprotagonista ent eu queria saber o quâo mau o mc vai ser no desenrolar da historia se possivel?