webnovel

Naruto’s Strongest Twin - The Battle Hungry Saiyan

Anime & Comics
Ongoing · 463.7K Views
  • 8 Chs
    Content
  • ratings
  • NO.200+
    SUPPORT
Synopsis

You don’t like saiyans? F*** off Peasant I am King of all for I am the Primordial Ape! “Ryusei: The Great Ape’s Tale” In the bustling Hidden Leaf Village, Naruto Uzumaki isn’t alone in his quest to become Hokage. He has a twin brother, Ryusei, who is a prodigy brandishing long spiky pink hair tied with his headband. Ryusei, a free spirit who operates without a Jonin, finds himself at the center of a “what if” tale that starts from the Chunin Exams. What If: On the fateful night when the Nine-Tailed Fox attacked the village, a colossal Great Ape appeared out of nowhere and body-slammed the rampaging beast, saving countless lives. The Great Ape, as it turns out, was none other than Naruto’s twin brother, Ryusei, who had awakened his Saiyan Bloodline under the moonlight. Minato and Kushina managed to seal the fox within Naruto without sacrificing their lives, changing the course of history. https://dis cord.gg/tCDaPJTJ

Tags
10 tags
You May Also Like

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews conplaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

Azrail93 · Anime & Comics
4.6
771 Chs

ratings

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background
Reviews
Liked
Newest
DaoistUKlG2H
DaoistUKlG2HLv2DaoistUKlG2H

АоцлцлыпыапфддфдфовчгутцлыдффыыоллышвшвшвгыоыойщйзылыьлллыфлфлфшшыфшщййщйззцыдвяыыылгвцшйлщффлфлыляоЯяосгщьыЬяшчовоцщчьчшшвцшйщфщыщыщдяляляоыояляшяшяшялчллч

VisionaryWorld
VisionaryWorldAuthorVisionaryWorld

Shamelessssssss review by the one and only! I have a couple things I want to point out now. -no harem -alternate universe/timeline -op chars/mc although the skill gap in each rank is greatly higher potential, let’s say a genin before is equal to mid-high chunin or low jonin level -Slower buildup until about chapter 50, I plan on writing a lengthy novel so I decided the foreshadowing was worth going into -be my best/worst critic, it makes me a better author ! -the system progression is sloppily planned but once I rewrite the first arc everything will make sense in the long run

SUPPORT

More about this book

General Audiencesmature rating
Report