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Mystery of the gone

Contemporary Romance
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Lee la novela Mystery of the gone escrita por el autor Be_novelish publicada en WebNovel. Xiu Fei, she was currently transferred to Country Huaxia after working as the new Chairman of the Social Affairs of U.S.A for working there on the same post. Coming back to her own country after years...

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Xiu Fei, she was currently transferred to Country Huaxia after working as the new Chairman of the Social Affairs of U.S.A for working there on the same post. Coming back to her own country after years should have felt good but she was anything but happy. She was filled with the desire to take revenge. She was weak in the past, so weak that she lost everything she had, so weak that she could not even save her own child, so weak that she could not even save her career she dreamt of since she was 4. But now she was no longer like that, she was stronger, stronger than more than 99.99% of people out there. Li Shi was a doctor, the heir of the Li and Mu family, a prodigy with hidden identities but most of all he was Xiu Fei’s childhood crush. They met, they rekindled their feelings, but he has a child. A child who looked a lot like her child would have looked if still alive and he faces the same problem because she has a daughter who looks resembles his daughter whom he lost. But this is not done yet over here. Not only do they have to solve multiple constrictor knots of their past and make their present smooth but they also have to face the world when they are blamed for the massacre in which 60% of the human population died. Join them in their journey from strangers to friends to lovers to childhood sweethearts to enemies and more. ___________________ EXCERPT:- Li Shi:" Love, how many children more do you want to have with me in the future? " Shocked by the sudden question and the content of the question she glared at him with wide eyes before saying "Are you mad? I don't want more children. Two are enough. It's gonna be hard to handle more it already is tough enough to handle these two naughty kids. Please I don't want to be tired to the bones everyday" "My love, don't you worry, I will help you take care of them. You can't get tired just with two kids. Remember your love letter. You yourself said that you want a whole cricket team of kids. We will surely create one. After all everything you ever dreamt of is my command to fulfill. Right?" And that was the moment she knew she was fucked up.

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Hey! The story so far seems good, the idea to choose songs seems pretty good as not many do that but that part gives a great feeling like a music video. Pretty sure your hypothetic music video would have been better as you have had the idea of the further story. Waiting for more updates and would love it if you could upload daily rather than an alternate day. I read your Author's note in chapter 2. Even though I came pretty late and didn't see that review, I would say that you don't have to get discouraged because of that. You write well but as the previous reviewer has said a few polishing would be appreciated as this particular writing style seems quite unexperienced but then this seems to be your first book. Anyways like the part where you did not add like other few new writers for asking for a leeway and are taking everything heads on. Looking forward to your work and hope that you would not give up writing because of one bad review as some more might come in the future as everyone's choices is different.

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Story is interesting although Be_Novelish still need a bit polishing yet AN ADMIRABLE ATTEMPT

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