Jojo System in RWBY

just bringing review from last fanfic I'm Yoshikage Kira. I’m 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don’t smoke, but I occasionally drink. I’m in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I’m trying to explain that I’m a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn’t lose to anyone.

A Jojo fanfic !? LETS GO !!! My name is Yoshikage Kira. I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone.

pls update these there is one jojo fanfic that i read similar to this but it doesnt update anymore. dont dissapoint me author..........=))))

I was honestly kinda worried about how this was gonna be compared to the original story you made, It is 10 time's better without a doubt and I'm glad you are making this its story is much more compelling and deeper rather than the comedic genius that the old one is it still keeps the old's charm but the story aspect is 100% better.

needs more reviews. good story "This world is full of things that don't go as you wish. The longer you live, the more you realize reality is just made of pain, suffering, and emptiness... Listen... In this world, whenever there is light, there are also shadows. As long as the concept of winners exist, there must also be losers. The selfish desire of wanting to maintain" -Madara Uchiha

I really like this story I wish we got a new update🙂👍

I really l this story I like the idea of having a system that gives the protgonist jojo stands almost every chapter I do wish that it would update with new chapters

Great job so far It’s far better then the previous one and because it will not let me just post because it is under 140 here is some random nonsense

The story is pretty good. Writing quality is good, stability of updates is good until chapter 25 when the author just stopped. The character design is great, and the world background is great.

I've read the previous versions of your story and I've read this one. this one has more going on with it and is objectively better in most ways. I do hope you make manasrury (hard to spell) the most powerful country just to f**k over atlas.

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hard to get a overview without outside information, there is not enough information abaut were they are or the lokal klimate, style, clothes and such.