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In Danmachi With A system

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What is In Danmachi With A system

Lee la novela In Danmachi With A system escrita por el autor HiddenRing publicada en WebNovel. this story is has been rewritten since 3 days ago. so of you are reading the Reviews some of them or most won't make any sense the bad or the good.Bell cranel in his grandfather house was having a ver...

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this story is has been rewritten since 3 days ago. so of you are reading the Reviews some of them or most won't make any sense the bad or the good. Bell cranel in his grandfather house was having a very high fever suddenly the fever is gone and so did the little bell ding!" the host has successfully attached his soul to the new body " I see. the story will follow the main story in the anime and manga with some changes until I reached the desired point and from then I will go in another direction totally different than what you expect. hope you like it

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BoboPingu
BoboPinguLv5BoboPingu

Please more author-same *fall down on his knees and starts praying for more chapter* ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

GentleMonk
GentleMonkLv5GentleMonk

definitely an awesome novel with good potential for OP MC MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePleaseMorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease MorePlease

MonkeySage
MonkeySageLv5MonkeySage

I think that this novel is pretty good and is appropriate for an OP character but author you're just killing me, its been more than 2 months since the last update

LTbutterfly287
LTbutterfly287Lv13LTbutterfly287

So when reading none of the interactions or really anything flowed right it all felt forced. He made hestia a full grown mature babe when she’s a goddess that doesn’t age out of what we say. He doesn’t really know what a famailia is cause gods don’t combine them. Seems to have thought zues had a familia. I may be wrong anyone can clarify for me but bell should be the actual grandson to zues in this bell is adopted. The author has a bad naming sense seeing how he renamed bell cranel to venom red. Has no real idea how the level up system works. Just from what I’ve read I’m pretty sure that the author maybe watched a bit of the anime but never touched the LN mainly die to having very little knowledge outside of comman things in the Wikipedia page you would find for it. All around for anyone who wants a story you could never really take to heart this isn’t really bad it would be good to some but it just has to many issues for me. The author could make something good one day he/she would just need original flare, a better name for starters maybe unique abilities and a proper understanding of the world he’s basing it in. Maybe just a few oc characters the mc could be an oc to. Don’t be afraid to do so it’s actually way better than what a lot of the fanfiction authors are doing.

Destrucfor
DestrucforLv6Destrucfor

The story is well written, true to the characters and has both accounted for the butterfly effect and fate. There are similar things to the original story that make this fanfiction almost seem like a parody. The fight scenes are also good. I hope the story doesn't turn into something PG. Obviously the story will continue using the OC MC as an excuse to rapidly assemble what was the entire original storyline. However what this author really does very well are the interpersonal and organizational changes associated with the interactions the OCs existence causes. Really excited to see the changes he brings about (none of the least of which is what the OCs attitude to some *ahem* companions) by being himself. Keep up the good work! And hope to see more of the story!

Tealcove
TealcoveLv14Tealcove

Keep it up author-san, cant wait to see what happens later 😊😊😊😊😊................................................1414141414141414141414141414141141414141414q4q4q4qq4q44q4q4q4q4q1414141414141414141

CrimsonDarkLord
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The update is slow. The writing style the author use is basic it's not bad but he alway put a name to who's taking. It's like speech bullbles use in comics and manga. Atless in the manga it not as noticeable, but when you put names in every dialogue it's lame and boring. To Author: USE indicating words then names, show not tell everytime.

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