The Darkness within
Sitting in an alcove of a run-down shop, Remi sighed to herself wondering how she ended up here. Looking out at the darkness that shrouded the surroundings, the soft pitter-patter of the rain and the moonlit night beckoned to her. “She’s over there!” a soft yell could be heard, breaking the tranquil atmosphere.
Groaning, She looked around trying to spot her pursuers, but at this moment the universe decided to give her a helping hand, and the rain that was once a pitter-patter became a raging storm. She couldn’t see five feet in front of her let alone the guards that searched for her.
Deciding now was a great time to escape unnoticed, she picked up her bag. Double checking her two short swords strapped to her waist, the pommels of both swords catching the fleeting rays of the moon through the storm.
BOOM
Lightning struck nearby, the resounding boom a signal for her to move. Dashing out from under the alcove. “Stealth!” thinking of the name of her innate race’s skill, a shimmer of light covered her body before fading. Now completely translucent she ran as if her life depended on it. -
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Hello! The novels premise is a weak to strong with some elements of kingdom building/army building along with furthering personal strength. It is a female-lead with some planned romance in the future with both genders(maybe monster too). Maybe R18 but... I will have to practice my 'eh-uh' descriptions to get that right. but those scenes wont actually have any impact on the story as a whole, as I plan to keep them as separate chapters that you can skip.
The main-character is a young female who is introduced as a hot-headed, act fast type of girl. She struggles sometimes to see the bigger picture causing her more heartache than if she took step-back and planned a little more.
Due to this she gets herself in a sticky situation right off the bat in the beginning chapters which is the first "Arc" of the novel.
FYI - She will gradually be turned into a villain. [read the novel if you wanna find out how :))))))))))]
I will attempt to keep the word count of each chapter at min 1,000 words
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