Fate/ Dark Moon

we are close to 30,000 words, I never thought this story would go so far; but I'm having fun writing it, even though it's just that, a fun. Don't expect a narratively perfect story, why won't you find one on my profile

starting the second volume and moving towards the star rating without being all my comments. I'm so happy that people are enjoying. Let's go ahead with our story

The whole plot and development is awesome. No Op and strong main character, he can be considered as very weak. I hope that author can continue to release more chapters. It has become one of my favourite Fate ff.

It's not a bad story, but I stopped reading when I realized that this was one of those authors who don't realize the difference between he/she....

It's well written enough and it has great grammar, but you should've put tragedy tag still. Since some people hate that and it is annoying to read bad endings.

The story would be perfect If I could understand the story at first try. I have to read it atleast 4 times ........ ............... .... ...

The story itself is interesting, sadly the Writing is on the Machine translated level of Grammer. If you don't mind MTL, then it's definitely worth a read.

God..................... this Chapter 22 was quite sad........................... ........................................................... ..........

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Good stuff albeit sad.

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very good with the story already picking up on some emotional issues. I loved the first part and I'm enjoying the second,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Story is well written with all but there is one big problem same story is in Fanfiction under author named wallker so some notification would be appreciated. I mean author could have just two different pen names but it would nice to have some kind of explanation to it in synopsis.

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