I've read all the chapters that have been released and here's my opinion: This is still shit. Even, the author, what did you use. You are wondering why I say that, so here it is. The problem with this piece is that the MC is behaving very stupidly. He has a broken system that gave him the lineage of Ophis and GR in the first world and how does he use his power? No way, just no way. Not, of course, he was showing off and so on, but nothing more. For example, when Rias CONFESSED that she wanted HE and Issei to be KILLED in order to revive them as members of her Pen and what is our dear idiot doing? Forgives her. YOU FUCK UNDERSTAND, SHE WANTED TO MANIPULATE HIS CONNECTION AND WHAT THE MC DOES FORGIVE THE AUTHOR YES YOU FUCK ABOUT, AS POSSIBLE, WHAT IF THE DEMONS WERE USING HIS RELATED ANYTHING TO THE PUNCH OPOPOO. Author, you are a very bad person, that's why make MCs so mentally retarded. That's just why. Okay, we figured out the stupidity of the MC, but what to do with the stupidity of others. For example, when in the park an MS was attacked by some no name what this dolboy is doing, right, DIALOGUE, of course it should be, he's a typical second-rate villain, but why IS THE MS DOING THIS, I repeat, but the author, you are a terrible person. The MC, instead of buying a system skill, reading memory, knocks out this fallen and wants to interrogate him. Well, that's what prevents him from just killing him. This piece is simply awful. All the best, I hope the author, you will correct your future works. All the bad things.
