Epic Of Cain: The Silver Star
Born into a wealthy family with a promising future, this was Cain Alesius, unfortunately life is full of surprises and the boy had bad luck as both his parents died suddenly in a car accident sometime after he was born, very sad, huh? The worst thing is, he was born with an extremely rare disease that had no treatment, this disease stole his ability to move around and brought excruciating pain with her, being wealthy, he managed to cope with the disease relatively well, using expensive equipment and precious medicines. Doctors also gave a duration of how long your body would last with this disease, yes, only 18 years, not much, right?
With his death he found himself in a completely white and silent space, the whole place seemed to stretch out endlessly and he had not much to do there, his current form... Well, he had taken the form of a luminous sphere, he glowed with a very dazzling silver color, like a lone star illuminating all the void. Time passed and he didn't even know how many days or weeks had passed in that place and he almost went crazy because of this infinite silence, but it seemed that luck was with him! A god appeared before him and asked him to wish for a cheat for his next life, and he wished for a system that gave him the ability to buy systems! That's right! With this system he could buy other systems, he found this incredibly intriguing, but it seemed to be something satisfying in his mind and indeed it was. This god explained to him that this place was called Limbo and that only the souls that held a karma almost impossible to count were placed, almost a VIP room for souls. Souls with this type of karma were rare even throughout the multiverse, apparently he had achieved this karma because of his past life where he was a saint who preferred to keep his karma stored there so that his next reincarnation could use and in this one he gave very lucky, he was the son of the richest humans in the world and when he died his fortune was donated to charity, giving hope to several children, and one of these children ended up to cure many of the world's diseases and made many advances in medicine. By a stroke of luck he basically financed the man who cured most of the human plagues! Crazy, right? With the accumulated karma of two lives full of good deeds he can make this request and earn a system that is simply broken! In the end he wasn't so unlucky, was he? With your memory intact, a really badass system, and going into a fantasy world of magic and sword, who wouldn't be thrilled? Well, the miserable boy story will continue. Will he be able to touch the stars? Will he break the shackles imposed on him or will he simply be defeated because of his frailty? Will its brilliance prevail against the darkness of the abyss? Is he in fact the silver star announced through the predictions of the sages? Heh, let's see...
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