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Dragon Ball UltimateVERSE

Autor: Hellycomic
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---------------A fan-fic story------------------ In a world of warriors, a legend emerged. Meet the ultimate badass, a hero whose name is whispered in fear. He conquered hearts, marrying in many families such as Bulma's family , Angel's Family , and starting a grand family. But little did he know, his journey was only beginning. Panchy's revelation: a secret that would alter the fabric of reality. Beerus, the God of Destruction, came to Earth, seeking a challenge. But our hero was waiting, his fist ready to reshape the universe. One punch, and Beerus lay defeated, his pride shattered. Everyone gasped in shock, eyes wide with wonder with the scenario graved in their memory . Whis, the Angelic Attendant, stood frozen, his composure broken because of the MC deeds . Beerus vowed never to fight him again, intimidated by his merciless power. The Great Priest, intrigued, yearned to test his strength. Whis proposed an unexpected alliance, a bond that would shake the cosmos. Years passed, and our hero continued to defy the impossible. He shattered the Domain dimension, unlocking the secrets of the universe. Cosmic existence beckoned, a realm beyond mortal comprehension. New challenges awaited, and the journey was far from over. Witness the birth of a legend, forged in the heart of chaos. Experience the unbridled power that leaves gods trembling. The adventure of a lifetime awaits; will you join the journey? Unlock the secrets of the cosmos, and the mysteries that lie beyond. Where will his journey lead? Only time will tell. Discover a story that will leave you breathless and yearning for more. Join the journey, and experience the unforgettable tale of a true legend..... *********Read to know more********

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Hellycomic
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Hello Viewers, I have decided to Update all the chapters of the day together . So that , fans have fun reading the complete one scenario.

Hellycomic
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Guys write some reviews , about the work and Please support , and sorry that I had to delete my earlier work , because of a notice from editor-in-chief, I had 22 power stone in that , I feel very sad and also happy that my fans loved that work . Hope you guys love this too and don't forget to read my another novel "Ultinum Crest " . I will put a lot of work in that .

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É raro encontrar boas histórias do dragon ball z onde o personagem principal trabalha duro para ficar forte em vez de ser super forte desde o início por causa disso acho que sua história realmente muito boa além disso você equilibra muito bem o texto e a escrita estou muito achei que ficou muito bem feito😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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your story a lots of potential but if you use that story in a good way you are not even making your words in a right way whatever you are using is not doing it's job and you are skipping many things many time ok don't skip the timeline you should be able to add something in that line some sentences some word so we can know what he was doing at that are to make your story even bigger ad something like while he was doing some kind of incident happened that's why he gain some kind of power by giving a logical choices just like and interferes of a God but he is interfering in his own life you will not understand what I am trying to say so he can become what will become God the most powerful to me for that he need some kind of help and he can do the help for get the help on his own the plot is that he is helping his own just starting stages the wou ldhave been a good story but this kind of story is never return or if somebody does try that they just f*** up in the middle and leave the story because they can't think anything because I have read some similar story

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