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Douluo Dalu- Rise of Sunshine

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What is Douluo Dalu- Rise of Sunshine

Lee la novela Douluo Dalu- Rise of Sunshine escrita por el autor Drake_White publicada en WebNovel. The power of sunshine rises from the bottom to the peak of Douluo Dalu.Ye Long creates a Path with his knowledge and path with OPness with Harem with Beauties.This is my 1st time writing so I hope you...

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The power of sunshine rises from the bottom to the peak of Douluo Dalu. Ye Long creates a Path with his knowledge and path with OPness with Harem with Beauties. This is my 1st time writing so I hope you enjoy it. this is Just a FanFic and English is not my 1st language so grammar can be bad but not that bad.

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the tang san of the story is a completely different person from the actual one and the mc character I don't know what to say but I feel like he is a little too arrogant

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the personality of sunshine holder doesn't match his.. if you want to give MC sunshine powers then don't give a prideful personality... ad if you want MC look like ESCANOR then(you can understand)... i appreciate if you rewrite this story where he goes on a journey on his own SOLO when he is 12 years old..GOTO other places such as places shown in douluo dalu 2 & 3..... it just look like where ESCANOR with a lustful personality looking for girls..

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Honestly this is difficult to read, the author constantly uses uppercase words as if the MC is shouting out every other word... Then when he/she, for whatever reason makes the MC yell he/she does cap on all the words and leave a few lowercase. All in all the Fanfic has some potential but the author is just not ready to write it. No offense but it feels like the author is a 10 year old who speaks out each word he/she writes resulting in the random uppercase words because it sounds ‘cool’. Take a break and learn to write a bit better and im sure once you are ready then the novel will explode in popularity. Otherwise someone might make a clone of this fanfic which will become much more popular and this will be forgotten due to the way it is written.

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story feels forced and really fast and you should put more details, like your first 4, if you put more details and explain more you could get 15-20 chaps. also you should stop rushing your story. and the grammar too, try using an app to help you.

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