webnovel

Doomsday: Godly System

War&Military
En Curso · 63K Visitas
  • 35 Caps
    Contenido
  • valoraciones
  • NO.200+
    APOYOS

What is Doomsday: Godly System

Lee la novela Doomsday: Godly System escrita por el autor mannatbir_singh publicada en WebNovel. ...

Resumen

Etiquetas
4 etiquetas
También te puede interesar

The Rose of hell Norvina the gypsy

Even though the James family was living a very extravagant and opulent lifestyle, they kept a secret from the rest of the world for many years. Until a brave young girl named Norvina enters their lives, once as a simple maid and then as a psychologist. She discovers that the family's only son is a wolf; no one has ever seen him without a mask. Edan has felt at ease and normal around Norvina since he first met her as the maid Ivanca, and he has grown even more emotionally connected to her as his psychologist Norvina. Norvina felt sympathy for him and tried everything she could to save him. They both decided to seek the help of a very impactful witch named Fonso, Norvina's godfather. They discovered his mother Maria made a deal with the witch Mila years ago to save his life, and how this blessing turned into a curse after Maria killed her husband in a car accident , as well as Mila's husband, who was his driver. They as well realised that Edan was a hell wolf sent to protect Norvina until she was offered as Amari the knight of darkness's bride. The close relationship and love that Edan and Norvina got to share was very problematic, especially for Maria, who tried to force her son to marry Anaïs Darwen in order to gain more power and wealth, and for Mila, who struggled to get to her daughter and offer her to the devil in exchange for power. They planned something together, they set a trap that Norvina easily fell for, and in order to escape her mother, she stole the powerful, dark magic book the sun of knowledge, and ran away after Edan came to her rescue, even though Amari was not called, his two evil dogs were on earth, and they easily defeated Edan. Norvina called Amari to break the curse and made a deal with him to break Edan's curse in exchange for her return as his bride. Edan became normal after his mother fed him lies about how his girlfriend betrayed him and left him with Amari; he was so consumed with the idea of vengeance that he decided to marry Anaïs. Since Norvina's disappearance, he has had dreams of a girl asking him to come and help her. He went to Fonso and learned about the deal Norvina made in exchange for giving him the normal life he had always desired. That's when his true form manifested as a white protector wolf rather than the grey hell wolf he was. He discovered that the only way to save Norvina from Amari was to bring Mila's heart as a sacrifice to Jiji, the godess of courage. With the help of her two eagles, Lalou the Nice and Midou the Flame, she was the only one who could end Amari and eliminate the book The Sun of Knowledge. After rescuing Mila, Edan informed the police about the car accident in which both Maria and her servant John were involved, who was later revealed to be having an affair with Maria. Anaïs left as soon as she discovered Edan was a wolf. Finally, Norvina and Edan married and had the happy ever after they had always planned.

djimmy_djou · Fantasía
Sin suficientes valoraciones
4 Chs

A Destruction of The Lord Lefruqan

Aldon, a twenty-year-old man lives together with his older sister, namely Lucy. They live in the city of Lufreqan. A secret town located on the border of Suffolk and Essex in England. Both of them lived without both parents. They worked as slaves under the leadership of Lobriz, a Lufreqan city bigwig who was most feared by anyone. Once, because of a mistake made by Aldon. Aldon and Lucy were given penalties for feeding Kolres. Kolres was a terrible monster throughout history. They gave food with the help of the Greeks. But, due to one mistake, Aldon and the others were forced to kill several Kolres. But, there is something strange about the incident. Before Aldon attacked some Kolres, he was given a strange mark on his forehead by the guardian dragon from that room. After the incident, Lobriz arrives and takes them to the execution room. Lucy eventually gives herself up to protect Aldon and Grece. From that incident, Aldon lost Lucy because Lobriz sold Lucy to a rich man. He also lived a kara. Aldon changed himself one hundred and eighty degrees. He turn into someone cold. He also intends to become someone strong so as not to be underestimated. And he was also determined to save Lucy. One day, when he was walking around in the city. He got news from a middle-aged man. He announced that any young man in the city could take part in training on the battlefield to hone his skills. Aldon was intrigued by that, too. And it was there, his new life journey began.

Rainzanov_words · Fantasía
Sin suficientes valoraciones

valoraciones

  • Calificación Total
  • Calidad de escritura
  • Estabilidad de Actualización
  • Desarrollo de la Historia
  • Diseño de Personajes
  • Contexto General
Reseñas
gustó
Últimos
NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14NowGoWithTheFlow

Author you need to work on your grammar because in just the first chapter I had a hard time reading your novel. By all means I can easily read it but how you wrote it is wrong. I like your plot so far though orphan is used alot. Don't give up pls

MiasmaLotus
MiasmaLotusLv15MiasmaLotus

Please please please go through, and edit. I was only able to get half way through the first page before a headache started to set in. this story has potential, but you need to fix the vocabulary problems.

APOYOS

Más sobre este libro

General Audiencesmature rating
Reportar