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DEPARTMENTAL STORE SYSTEM

Autor: Bigbro
Eastern Fantasy
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Lee la novela DEPARTMENTAL STORE SYSTEM escrita por el autor Bigbro publicada en WebNovel. Young boy finds himself in an unfamiliar world and a rundown shop left by his father...

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Young boy finds himself in an unfamiliar world and a rundown shop left by his father

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Lexi_Roberson
Lexi_RobersonLv1Lexi_Roberson

I think for a new novel, it is doing pretty well to say the least. It has a very good plot line, and introduction as well. I loved how the author used very descriptive words to let the reader know what they were trying to say. I did notice there are some grammar issues, and I recommend checking those out. You can use various online grammar error apps, whatever is available to you. I think despite that, the book has a really nice flow to it. The characters are well developed , the only issue I had as a reader were the mistakes in the book. If you can edit those, I think this book would be a hit!!! I want to mention I am the user known as BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

JustLetMeSleep
JustLetMeSleepLv4JustLetMeSleep

The idea is pretty neat, a little hiccups on some sentences and words but it is a good novel if done right, uploading seems to be good, I know how hard writing is so good job for a first novel if I'm correct that this is not your first.

TOMB_DRONE
TOMB_DRONELv5TOMB_DRONE

its a nice concept, the author is going in the right direction so far and i am not feeling sleepy while reading this novel so far hahhahahah

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

This novel is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! The plot itself was unique and was very engaging to read. I am very well pleased with the writing of the author. Good luck and may your novel be blessed with more readers.

Daoist501779
Daoist501779Lv2Daoist501779

cant say much from the first four chapters that i have read...its a start hope you polish the novel cause i think i might read it after waiting some more

Contractor_101
Contractor_101Lv13Contractor_101

i love the idea, hope the author does not stop uploading and just a little hiccups with grammar but hey, we are all humans and make mistakes

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