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Deleted book Please search for "Afloat" and add to your library.

Autor: Tianah_ann
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What is Deleted book Please search for "Afloat" and add to your library.

Lee la novela Deleted book Please search for "Afloat" and add to your library. escrita por el autor Tianah_ann publicada en WebNovel. This is the deleted copy of "AFLOAT" Please search for "AFLOAT," add to your library and enjoy....

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This is the deleted copy of "AFLOAT" Please search for "AFLOAT," add to your library and enjoy.

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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv4Sphire1707

Seems like a good read. Good grammar, very apt descriptions, and an interesting story to look forward to reading. This is definitely something you'd like to read.

ZoeTinnah
ZoeTinnahLv12ZoeTinnah

Come one, come all let's support this piece of work. Everything is well described even though some grammar mistakes need to be fixed. Good work Author Keep fighting you can do it

Railvas
RailvasLv14Railvas

The writing quality has really improved after the second chapter, making it much more flowing and easy to read. I respect how the author improved it after getting reviewed. I feel the story background is being built carefully and slowly, so you might want to read a few chapters to understand the story, the MC's background also seems interesting. The characters are hard-working, talented, and cheerful, I liked them. I hope you can continue the story, and I'd recommend it to anyone.

TheLastRemnants
TheLastRemnantsLv12TheLastRemnants

I tried to give the story a benefit of a doubt by reading the read of the chapters after chapter one. But I just couldn’t get into it, sorry. There’s parts of the story that has quotation marks when it’s character action and none when the character is actually talking. The way the first person is written is more flowing like a list. I did this, I did that, I did this, I did that. You should switch up your sentences where it doesn’t always start with I. Right now, I don’t know what the plot is or where it’s going. The characters relationship with their father is bland. They don’t have a lot of thought process. And to me, was just not interesting enough to continue reading. Try to make a document on the character with likes, dislikes, and habits. And they might seem more fleshed out than looking like you jumped to writing without having anything set in stone.

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