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A Universe's Tidal Wave

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What is A Universe's Tidal Wave

Lee la novela A Universe's Tidal Wave escrita por el autor SuperSilentSin publicada en WebNovel. The Universe is in a crisis. God, its guardian, has nearly no options left.Every two thousand years a Tidal Wave washes through the Universe destroying everything in its way.Now he gives his three dis...

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The Universe is in a crisis. God, its guardian, has nearly no options left. Every two thousand years a Tidal Wave washes through the Universe destroying everything in its way. Now he gives his three disciples an all-deciding mission. They have to repair his ultimate weapon, the Morningstar. The Morningstar is a Gods weapon. These weapons are constructed bringing planets into a constellation. Every single planet needs a core as its key component. It has to be a living soul and the stronger the soul, the stronger the weapon! But making this job even harder is that only the souls from those, who got born on one of the constellation's planets, can be picked as the core. Only if this weapon is repaired will they have a small chance to survive. God promises the disciple of his with the best performance a free wish. Now watch how his disciples fight against each other rearing talents across the planets and scheming against each other to finally fulfill their mission. Who will win the wish and who will be the cores? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello everyone, Thx a lot for reading. I know your time is precious. The story is obviously about God's disciples rearing talents to repair the Morningstar. But you should know if you read this that I will follow most of the time the people, who might become the cores! Your job will be to guess when one of God's disciples intervened. Maybe after the book is over you will be able to guess, who will win the wish! But I warn you!!! Sometimes it will be clear, who acted and sometimes not!!! Don't expect you to see everything, there will be times things appear different on the surface as they truly are! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Part 1: Mission Morningstar Part 2: Heroes of earth emerge Part 2 will have a little different setting. More about that after I finished the first part. I believe the first part might already take 1-2 years... and for most readers, it will be a completed story because, after part 1 ends, the story around the cores and the morningstar is basically over. They might appear again when God faces the Tidal Wave at end of the story... So I hope you enjoy it ;) pls leave a comment and/or a rating for me ;) and pls, put my book into your library so that you get messaged when I release more chapters. I promise only that I will keep writing this depending how much time I have at hand the number I publish will change. Nevertheless, I won't drop it EVER. Promised!!! Pls, notice that I am a beginner author. So votings are highly appreciated. I try to become better to get contracted in the long run. Of course, if there was a contract I could promise weekly chapters... Yours SSS SuperSilentSin PS: Have fun ;)

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Writing quality 3/5 - at a level where you can understand the story but there are awkwardly placed words as well as a few misspelled ones, but overall its understandable Stability of updates 2/5 - looking at the dates the chapters where posted i cant say that it has a good stability. Story development 3.5/5 - fairly interesting setup, but there are still things to improve in the way it was presented but overall it seems to interesting as its implied the mc will grow stronger--or mc's seeing as in the beginning good needs a lot of strong souls Character Design 3.5/5 - good character designs but still fall into some sort of trope, specially the chance encounter with strong/mentor/benefactor, the shounen type protagonist with a mysterious back story etc. World background 4/5 - the world is explained already in the early chapters and you can tell a little bit of it, as well as the world where the mc or first mc is at with a little bit of detail but i cant see the whole of it so not a perfect score as of chapter 5. story wise it has a fairly good setup, save the universe, train some people to get stronger but i dont know in the future as it implies that those that become strong will become a weapon ingredient... but i cant judge it yet because of that, right now story is focusing on an mc that gets some sort of powerup, so i expect some trials and tribulations to come to make that mc strong, and maybe do something about his fate... but as of now i cant tell. as for the author, all i can say is that work a bit more on your grammar, as it feels awkward, and there also some missing words inbetween.

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Hey guys! I will shamelessly review my novel with 5 Stars. It is my first work and it means a lot to me. Pls, consider reading and rating as that helps me get better. Thx!

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