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[Campione] Somehow Became a Godslayer

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The adventure story of a protagonist who somehow ended up becoming a Campione.

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TLDR at the end. Writing Quality: 3/5 Translator is very good but the original source material is horrible so the quality of the translation couldn't hide the atrocious writing. Story Development: 2/5 This FF is hot garbage and I can tell that the author is not a writer and it's their first time writing. First, and most importantly for this part, the pacing. The pacing is atrocious, it genuinely went from one chapter of killing his first Heretic God to being thrown to fight 2 Hawaiian Gods in the next couple of chapters. There is no downtime and no development to be seen whatsoever. Also, might I mention the fact that (an OC) Great Knight of the Copper-Black Cross just latched onto the MC and the interactions between them are limited because the pacing is too fast? Literally keeps jumping from one action scene to the next. Another thing, for some reason this author loves using the same set of words like "I was bored but once again Alessandro was the one to break the boredom." Word for word whenever applicable. Another example is the time he wakes up after fighting the first and second Hawaiian Gods. Character Design: 3/5 Generic Korean college student goes on vacation and accidentally kills a Heretic God in Italy being Medusa. Update Stability: 5/5 Translator is consistent, nothing to be said. World Background: 3/5 Used Hawaii as a location but otherwise very bland. TLDR: Translator is very good idk why they translate this hot garbage. Repeat use of entire paragraphs because the author is lazy and very big pacing issues which cause a cascade of other problems. There are other problems but all I can say is aside from translation quality and the fight scenes being somewhat good, this FF is hot garbage on part with MTL Chinese Cultivation Slop. My head hurts from the poison.

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