'Lucky' Number 7

It's amazing. Though I feel like the fanfic would be overlooked due to its title. Maybe Jinchuriki of the Seven Tails in DxD would be more apt. And add a synopsis and tags. Else it is a good fic.

There are two things I don't like about the novel. The first thing is the beginning, which I see as quite weak, you could have made some introduction of characters or powers. The second thing is that you have removed the personality of the tailed beast. I think he would have been a better support character than the ones you've chosen.

You know the drill by now. So ignore my post. But don't forget to throw a review, I'll really appreciate it. Support the fanfiction