Review Detail of Happytochatwithyou in As Homelander In Multiverse

Bro this good novel I like this but the only thing that is bad is ur killing people left and right, yes I know u said the mc is not a saint that is okay I like evil one then saint one but before killing people try to write valid reason, a plot , a betrayal , backstabbing, a good reason and some kind of major or minor consequences for killing etc,that is what makes ur fanfic a good one seperates itself from rest of the fanfics