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Item: Reborn as Gary Oak in pokemon world
Rating: 3.8

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Knight_NoctisLv419dKnight_Noctis

In terms of story quality , it might not be that bad, but sadly, there is so much mistranslation. It completely destroyed the immersion . Saying the sound of squirtle as jenny or Johnny, sometimes saying kami , then there is mistranslation of pokemon names. Using the word "breeding" instead of training constantly got me confused. I'm still not sure what he's talking about arcanine getting killed also. If the translator fixed this minor mistakes, this story has got incredible potential.

Reborn as Gary Oak in pokemon world

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Poke_writerAutorPoke_writer

I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback

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Kamikaze_EagleLv4Kamikaze_Eagle

Maybe start with the section saying you will improve. Capitalize your I's and *make not may.

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback

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Kamikaze_EagleLv4Kamikaze_Eagle

Oh yeah, and periods at the end of sentences.

Kamikaze_Eagle:Maybe start with the section saying you will improve. Capitalize your I's and *make not may.

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ProfaneImmortalLv13ProfaneImmortal

where is Gary's harem ??

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback

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8utenjxiLv18utenjxi

There is still breeding instead of training.

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback

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IA_Extra13Lv4IA_Extra13

is it Harem?

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback

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