Usually I’m down for an edgy MC however he’s too in his head granted I have only read to chapter 6. But it’s like every other paragraph is him going on and on about how he is scared of everything and it is harder to survive in the world due to it being real life. But after he does that for every single thing he does it is legitimately aggravating when you are genuinely interested in seeing how he will eventually develop not constantly going on and on and not doing anything about it. Especially when it’s alluding that he was an adult, so he needs to grow up. He may have changed later in the story and I do not intend to put down the work itself because I am sure it is a solid piece with great potential, it unfortunately for me did not get to that point soon enough.
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