Review Detail of DRAGONWORRIOR10 in Veilbound: Arcane Awakening

Item: Veilbound: Arcane Awakening
Rating: 4.8

Details zur Rezension

DRAGONWORRIOR10Lv131dDRAGONWORRIOR10

I have read a few chapters. the writing quality is good in my opinion but I think you need to polish your storytelling. You have to add more description to the events that happen during each scene to help people visualise the scenes. looking forward to seeing how it goes

Veilbound: Arcane Awakening

jitace

Beliebt bei 2 Personen

MÖGEN

Antworten1

jitaceAutorjitace

"Thank you so much for taking the time to read my book and for your thoughtful feedback! I really appreciate your insight, and I agree – adding more descriptive depth to the scenes can definitely enhance the storytelling. I'll keep that in mind as I continue to polish and improve the story. Your support means a lot, and I’m excited to keep growing! Looking forward to hearing what you think as the story develops."