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Godfather_Gambler
Godfather_GamblerLv122mth
2024-08-18 11:16

This fanfic is next level! The author is killing it—can't wait for next chapter. 🚀🚀

Naruto: Starting By Saving Mikoto

Exotica_Pvt
3.5
87 Chs

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midgetydeath
midgetydeathLv4

Not really. The writing is okay, but the writer has based the entire story on either ignorance of basic history of the setting, in this case the Uchiha Massacre the entire story is built on, or his MC is a lying, manipulative bastard. Like, the entire basis of the story is basicallt the MC lying to Mikoto about the Uchiha Massacre as being the exact inverse of what actually happened. Also, the writet doesn’t know or changed that Mikoto was a core conspirator of the coup, though that’s a common change anyway in fanfics.

1mth
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SaintSin
SaintSinLv4

Is this a bot?

1mth
1
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Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1

This is really bad. Objectively the grammar and syntax us fine and plenty readable, bit the character make absolutely no sense. He revives mikoto and 10 minutes later after seeing her dead husband's body, he suddenly remembers after lusting after her unconscious body that her husband is dead. She asks how he revived her amd he answers by answering a totally different question and she just accepts it? She doesn't push she doesn't demand it's like his non answer to a very very important and godlike ability is no big deal. Hard limits are imposed on certain abilities and immediately contradicted on the same chapter. This is one of the worst naruto fanfics I have ever read.

2mth

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

The story overall is just forced nonsense. the grammar is cool but but by chapter 3 you can tell exactly where the story is headed. he'll be catching all the rogue women or ones at odds with their ninja villages. The way he snags em isn't so unbelievable but the way he keeps em is. and Mikoto seemed like such an idiot. I wouldn't ever believe that was the mom of itachi. too much nonsense to make this story work for me. So ill pass, not braindead enough at the moment.

2mth
DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv13

this is just a bad wish fulfilment fic, i don't mind stuff like this usually but this is just bad, the MC is just another super virgin harem collector, and why is mikoto so dumbed down?? she obviously knew that the village and clan was in odds with each other, and most of not all scenes feel very forced, just not my kinda novel, if you like it gl ig

1mth
TheWorthyOne
TheWorthyOneLv14

Mikito choose to die no?

2mth
Zed1_Eren_
Zed1_Eren_Lv4

When Mc says we have time and can take it slow. It's where I loose my interest in any novel/fanfiction

1mth
Cenzo_1235
Cenzo_1235Lv2

Good fanfic I enjoy it, like that it's starts differently than other fanfics from naruto verse, above all story is good for me but everyone has there own opinions. Author ,Thanks for the fanfic is really enjoyable can't wait for more updates since I'm all caught up 😁 Good job ur doing great so far 👍🏽

1mth
Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4

This is a very stupid and implausible fanfic. I wasted my time on this (the dialogue... and the way the author wants to build the relationship between MC and Mikoto... is just disgusting).

1mth
Apex_Yahye
Apex_YahyeLv6

got baited by the image not interested but seems fine

2mth
Cenzo_1235
Cenzo_1235Lv2

Love this fanfic ❤️ I fr can't wait for more updates 🙏🏽 Author thanks for this ff it's really good ❤️

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