If there are any mistakes in the wording, I apologize. I am not yet fluent in English and only use a translator for my novels.
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LIKEThe story is quite good but yeah the confusion on he and she is sometimes really annoying. I also suggest that when you use the template you can just use the name like when you put Lux(Raiden) or Lux(Mayuri) you can just use Raiden or Mayuri since we already know that they are one anyway. There's no need to repeat it again and again since it a mouthful ro read. Apart from this I am satisfied with the story. Great work author