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Bakakeju40
Bakakeju40Author2mth
2024-08-21 19:03

If there are any mistakes in the wording, I apologize. I am not yet fluent in English and only use a translator for my novels.

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Amon91
Amon91Lv4

Can he in the future stop transforming in his template and still have the powers because if not it's really annoying ?

Cyro_13
Cyro_13Lv4

The story is quite good but yeah the confusion on he and she is sometimes really annoying. I also suggest that when you use the template you can just use the name like when you put Lux(Raiden) or Lux(Mayuri) you can just use Raiden or Mayuri since we already know that they are one anyway. There's no need to repeat it again and again since it a mouthful ro read. Apart from this I am satisfied with the story. Great work author

AlptekinAkkoc
AlptekinAkkocLv1

gelecekte karakterleri çağırıp haremmi yapacaksın

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