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It's a good idea, the bases are well written, I can't say yet that it's a good story because it's still at the bases (Chapter 35), it has a different idea than what I'm used to and that's good. It has a future and I hope it's not abandoned. The only "failed " is that it is slow-paced, which is not bad in itself, but eventually almost all slow-paced stories are abandoned because the author lost motivation, so it is not a criticism but more of a fear.
Naruto: The Medical Shinobi
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Thank you for your honest review. While I acknowledge that the story moves slowly at times, that will not always be the case. Just wait till the MC gets his hand on Ninjutsu. It is going to get interesting. For as long as I have readers and patreons, I will not be dropping this tale. The story or the MC will not stay the same forever. Both will grow. I hope you don't mind the edits. I am editing the badly written chapters as my writing becomes more polished. With regards, PJ.