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2024-10-26 06:04

La historia no está mal, está bien escrito, no hay muchos problemas en el guión, pero tengo una queja, que es la razón por la que me dejó caer la historia. Spoiler: La waifu, el autor fue inteligente, creo una linda waifu, era muy agradable, y luego la mata, además, fue de una forma muy poco emotiva no especial, en un momento estaba viva, y luego al otro murió, fue muy frustrante, incluso pensé en la idea, ya que el mc fue en enviado milenios al pasado, una vez que mc se recuperará y fuera de regreso a su tiempo original, que llegara justo antes de la muerte de la waifu, y la rescatará, pero mis súplicas no fueron escuchadas...

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