It could be better, to begin with it's not fun to read about a bad-tempered protagonist, I don't want to read a Logan 2.0, so why make a reincarnating protagonist if his personality is similar to the original Logan; second, it is said that his organization works in the shadows but at the beginning of the novel it is said that they do not make an effort to hide, furthermore, it could not be more cliché, a protagonist who does not like to attract attention, this is seen in 90 % of webnovel MCs.
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