Review Detail of Lucifer20 in The Alpha in the MCU (old)

You’re story is basically All over like you skipped all of how started his pack and his organization and his growth and I don’t think there were mate bonded in marvel or just add it to keep harem small you just left out a lot and I don’t care if you do flashbacks because its going to fail like a lot of other fanfic were they skip over like all there childhood and teen years and adult years and go right to all powerful organization or all powerful character I just think most of all them fail ps you lost a lot of content because his character journey is basically complete like the rest of the story will be him getting together with other 2 Women in his harem and beating up super villains and getting his last step in his plans we don’t know and the things like the Japan/china mc face slapping