Review Detail of Feanorw in ECHOES OF A BROKENHEART

The writing is great. The pacing could benefit from some improvement, but it’s mostly good. Story development however takes a toll on the writing. So far the story is a shallow description of her day-to-day activities. No much detail is presented besides a plain "she had some trouble, but overcame it". This also makes the character feel a bit shallow, because it limits the possibility of understanding and relating to her on a deeper level. World background is well done, considering the writing style and story depth. It’s enough to further explore and contextualize the world. It would be great to have more details on Emily's daily life. Keep up the good work, author!