Review Detail of OldFellow in From Hitman to Hogwarts

Nice story, the pace is somewhat fast but if the focus are the later years or after Hogwarts it makes sense, the speed in wich he learns “advanced” magic is weird by this pace he will learn everything there is to learn by the second/third year wich doesn’t sound possible, but the apparent focus guns will have in this story are kind of a dealbreaker, I understand if he has to use them on the muggle world but on the magic one i just can’t stand it it shouldn’t be a hp fanfic than but something else